By caden738
Once so close
A bond of two boys
A relationship one could not bowse
Brothers
–
Then it did separate
As the world is that way
That’s just fate
Strangers
————————————————————————————————————————
For more from the author check out his blog and Twitter. This writer is currently looking for work, as a freelance poetry writer, or content writer- if you are interested in working with him please contact him at Caden738@theh2digroup.com.
A great poem!
LikeLiked by 2 people
So glad you enjoyed it!
LikeLiked by 1 person
🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks! 🙂
LikeLiked by 2 people
Some powerful poetry on his blog!
LikeLiked by 2 people
So glad you enjoyed it!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks so much! I really do try 🙂
LikeLiked by 2 people
👍😊
LikeLiked by 2 people
Very descriptive of a relationship. Beautiful
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thanks! 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
The lines on finishing both stanzas are complete opposites. That’s a very good technique!
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you so much, I really enjoy commentary like this!
LikeLiked by 2 people
It is my pleasure!
LikeLiked by 2 people
This is powerful. It reminds me of twin brothers and their struggle to unite but also separate to become their own person. Beautiful
LikeLiked by 2 people
I’m so glad you enjoyed it!
LikeLike
I did. Great post . I always enjoy your posts
LikeLiked by 1 person
Hey! I hope you do peer nominations because I just nominated you for sunshine blogger award! Congratulations to you! Your blog is a value to the community!
https://myconcealeddepression.com/2019/07/15/no-debt-but-love-has-nominated-me-for-the-sunshine-blogger-award/
LikeLike
Thank you so much I will definitely check it out!
LikeLike