Her- A Short Story

Her- A Short Story

I usually write blogging advice but as you probably know if you read yesterdays post I accidentally burnt my fingers and hand while cooking so I can’t type a lot right now and my blogging advice posts are quite detailed so they tend to be much longer. So, instead of writing a blogging advice post I decided to do something that I have wanted to do for a while now which is write a short story. I will save the blogging advice post for later on in the week when my hand/fingers are a bit more healed. I really hope you enjoy this post and if you do enjoy it please let me know in the comments below. It’s been a while since I’ve written a short story so I am very nervous about sharing this but I hope you enjoy it. I was inspired by Shweta Suresh who always writes really amazing short stories on her blog!

Her- A Short Story

I quietly lie in the closet waiting for her to come home. I still remember the first time I saw her at the bookstore. She walked in with her friends, the biggest smile on her face. Her eyes eagerly moved from title to title as she looked at the books one after another. Her friends seemed bored but she just grew more excited with every summary she read. And her eyes were filled with longing as she assured her friends she would only be a few more minutes. She kept looking and I kept staring at her in awe of her beauty. She hadn’t noticed me yet- I mean why would she notice me? No one ever noticed little old me in the corner. But then something happened. Something that changed my life forever- she actually looked at me. “Well, hello there,” she whispered with a grin on her face.

Since that day I have been waiting in her closet. Waiting for her as she leaves and drinking in her beauty whenever she comes home. Sometimes she brings friends over which I always find annoying. They don’t know her like I do. They don’t love her like I do. Sometimes she brings new friends over which is even worse. They spend a couple of days together, sometimes a couple of weeks but it never lasts longer than that. They can never appreciate her like I do, they never seem to see her true value.

I can hear her opening the door, she’s talking to someone on the phone. No she’s yelling at someone on the phone… “I never want to see you again, it’s over between us, ” she yells into her phone. Goodbye Jonathan who likes sports, energy drinks and something called monster trucks. She sobs for a while on her bed and goes for a shower. She comes back in her towel and I can see her approaching the closet.

She’s coming towards me, I can see her long hair dripping with water, I can smell the scent of her shampoo. I can’t take it anymore. I want her to find me, I want her to notice me, I want  to hold me instead of those worthless fools she calls boyfriends. The closer she gets the more frightened I get and yet I feel excited at the same time. She open the doors and looks directly at me.

“There you are,” she sighs looking down at me. “Time to finally read this book I guess,” she mutters to herself. And now I am content because everyone knows that people come and go but book? Books are forever.


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180 responses to “Her- A Short Story”

  1. Ouch for your fingers but also enjoyed this thanks for sharing.

    1. Thank you and it’s actually better now!

  2. I hope your hand heals quickly. 😊

    1. Thank you so much! 😊

  3. Enjoyed the read! Hope your fingers are feeling better soon!

    1. Thank you so much!!

  4. An interesting short story 🙂

    1. Thank you!

  5. For a moment I THOUGHT it was a ghost 😂😂😂 Pooja, I hope your fingers heal soon! 😔

    1. Thank you! Haha yeah I wanted everyone to keep guessing what it was!

  6. Oh man! At first I wondered if this was one of those (Netflix) “YOU” stalky situations! Then I thought maybe it was the beloved stuffed animal waiting for the owner🧸. Love the unexpected twist at the end.

    1. I know right! I got the ‘YOU’ vibes too. I was just picturing Joe and Beck the whole time. Till I got the end, that twist.

      1. Ok, glad to know I wasn’t the only one. Pooja put a great twist on that story. I really enjoyed it.

      2. I was totally going for a Joe vibe for the book!!

    2. Ooh I totally had Joe in mind when I was writing this!! Thank you!

      1. It was really great!

    3. Absolutely!

  7. Are you kidding me? How could I not love this? The beginning made me think it is a romantic story between lovers, then in the middle with the ‘waiting in the closet’, I thought maybe it’s a psycho stalking her, then it hit me at the end…😂this was thrilling. Loved it

    1. Haha thank you so much- glad you enjoyed it!!

  8. Lovely! Hope you’re ok?

    1. Thank you! Yes I am much better today.

  9. I love it! I knew books had feelings!❤

    1. Yes how could they not!

  10. Get well soon! I really enjoyed reading this ❤️

    1. Thank you so much!!

      1. You’re welcome 😊

  11. Sorry about your burns. Hope you get well soon!

    1. Thank you so much!

  12. The twist at the end made me smile. Thanks!

    1. Glad you enjoyed it!

  13. This is such a cute story. Books have always been for me in all phases of my life. They give the unwavering support which everyone needs in their lives.

    1. Thank you! I feel the same way about books- they really are always there for you.

  14. Great story Pooja!
    Good for you to try something g you’ve wanted to do… you had me going there… 😂🤪😂🙌

    1. Thank you so much! Haha glad you enjoyed the story- it was actually quite fun to write and try something new!

      1. I bet it was!!!! It’s fun to surprise yourself right?!!!

        1. Yes it is- I think it’s always fun and exciting to spice up your life once in a while!

  15. Loved the twist at the end!! You should write more stories. And I’m so sorry for your hand, get well soon dear!

    1. Thank you so much!!

  16. Wow. I loved it. I kept on guessing who it was in the closet and finally it turned out to be a pleasent surprise.
    Sorry to hear about your burns. Get well soon.

    1. So glad you enjoyed the story! Thanks- it’s already much better!

  17. I’m so sorry about your fingers. Good they heal soon💓
    Nice read, initially thought it was a stalker 😃

    1. Thank you so much! Haha yeah I wanted it to have a bit of a horror vibe.

      1. Lol… It sure did

  18. Aww,I loved this one. A beautiful story, Pooja. I hope your burnt fingers are healing.

    1. Thank you so much and yes they are much better!

      1. Glad to hear that! Wish you a speedy recovery 🙂

  19. Hi, youre an inspiration to any new blogger so I nominated you for an award!
    https://musingsbyamedstudent.wordpress.com/2020/08/05/blogging-awards/

    1. Thank you so much- I’m honoured!

  20. Yo – books never let you down. There was a creepy element there Pooj!

    1. Thanks Opher!

  21. What a clever story! Oh, to think that our books might be in love with us. 🙂 Thank you so much for sharing with us, Pooja. I hope your fingers heal very soon!

    1. Thank you so much! Yes I wanted the book to feel about humans how we feel about books!

  22. Sorry Pooja..you shall get well sooner

    1. Thanks so much!

      1. Welcome.
        Blessed day and may your life prosper and your health too.

        1. Thanks and same to you!

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    This is so beautiful. Get well soon.

    1. Thank you so much!

  24. Nice to find someone who feels the same way about books that I do!
    🙂 wonderful story.

    1. Thank you so much!

  25. Firstly, Get well soon dear💐..
    And its a beautiful story, loved reading it😍📖

    1. Thank you so much!!

  26. I wish you a quick recovery! Also, as for the story, I feel conned (but in a good way). Great story!

    1. Thank you!! Haha I’m glad you enjoyed it!

  27. Hope your hand gets better Pooja. Yep, you had me fooled lol. Great story.

    1. Thank you! Haha thanks- I always find writing from the POV of a non-living object to be fascinating.

      1. And you did it well 🙂

        1. Thank you 😊

  28. Hope you feel better!

    1. Thank you so much!

  29. Sorry for your injuries. Get well soon.
    Way to keep the suspense to the last minute! I loved it. 😊

    1. Thank you so much and glad you enjoyed the story!

  30. I loved the way you wrote the story☺️ I had written a story with a similar concept last year.. hope you enjoy my story too☺️
    https://starryeyedenigma.com/2019/09/04/another-love-story/

    1. Thank you so much and I’ll check it out!

  31. Exactly… Books are forever… 🙂
    Spiritulity Awakening

    1. Yes definitely!

  32. I’m sorry to hear about your hand. I hope it heals soon. Your story is incredible. I was transfixed until the end. I hope there’s more in the future. Take care.

    1. Thank you so much and so glad you enjoyed the story- there is definitely more to come!

  33. Great short story. I hope your burnt fingers heal quickly.

    1. Thank you so much!!

  34. I didn’t want it to end. It was such a twisted turn of events!! Loved it. Feel better ❤️

    1. Thanks so much Tiani! I actually feel a lot better today!

      1. Glad to hear it 🤗

  35. The twist was woww.. Didn’t see it coming till it did. so many things in just a small piece. 👍👍
    Well you should continue with stories even after your fingers are healed. wishes for you and fingers 🙂

    1. Thank you so much that’s so sweet of you to say!

  36. vary nice story, I like the twist in the end!

    1. Thank you so much!

  37. OMG! I love this!!!! Keep sharing your short stories. I also have written about two short shorties but I haven’t shared them. Cannot wait to read more.

    1. Thank you so much! You should totally post yours I would love to read them!

  38. Absolutely loved the misdirection.
    Get well soon

    1. Thank you so much!

  39. Nice one! I hope your hand heals well.

    1. Thank you so much!

  40. Great story – hooked me till the end. Hope your fingers heal fast.

    1. Thank you so much!!

  41. Love it! Very clever!

    1. Thank you so much!!

  42. Is this how the unread books on my list feel?😳😂🙊 I loved the twist at the end, great story. Glad your hand’s better😊

    1. Thank you! Haha yes now we know what books are really thinking 😜

      1. I better read the ones I haven’t then🙊

        1. For your safety I would advise that you do 😉😂

  43. What a twist? What made me think that was a cat….Loved it….Get well soon

    1. Ooh yes I can see why you would think it’s a cat! Thank you!

  44. Interesting short story

    1. Thank you!

  45. Love this! The twist really got me! I thought it was an animal 😂 but a book? Oh my gosh! It made me smile because reading books is my favorite hobby. 😄 You should share more short stories, Pooja! I’d love to read more!
    I hope your fingers heal soon! 💖

    1. Thank you so much! I am really into writing from the POV of non-living things because it’s so amusing to me.
      Thanks- it’s a lot better today!

      1. That’s so cool! You’re very creative, Pooja!
        Yay! I’m so glad to hear that.

        1. Thank you!

          1. You’re welcome, Pooja! 💖

  46. I love the twist at the end, was not expecting that! Great story! ❤

    1. Thank you so much!!

  47. Loved this pooja. Total Joe vibes!! I think I need a re-run of YOU after this.

    1. Thank you- I was totally going for Joe from You!!

  48. Your shorts stories inspire me to write my own. I am not a strong writer but it feels like something I need to do. Hopefully you can check it out sometime. Thank you 😊

    1. Thank you and I look forward to reading your short stories as well!

  49. Loved this, you are so clever and talented!

    1. Thank you so much that really means a lot to me!

  50. Beautiful story! Quite an unexpected ending.

    1. Thank you so much!

  51. I was wondering what was in the closet – great ending!

    1. Thank you! Haha what did you think was in there?

      1. My first thought was some sort of gnome! 😀

        1. Ooh yes I can see how you would think that!

  52. Wow, That is a different one, loved it. Looking forward to more!🙂

    1. Thank you so much!

  53. Hope you heal soon! This was a very cute twist!

    1. Thank you! Haha glad you enjoyed it!

    2. You got me on this one. I thought a puppy would be in the closet. Nice surprise ending. 😁

      1. Haha glad you enjoyed it!

  54. Great story! Can’t wait for more! Glad the aloe worked!!! 😁

    1. Thank you and yes it did help a lot!!

  55. oh yes!!! loved it!!

    1. Thank you so much!!

  56. I hope your finger gets healed! This is such a good read!!

    1. Thank you so much!!

  57. Hope you feel better! It was a great read 😊

    1. Thank you and I feel much better today!

  58. I hope you have speedy recovery Pooja. I loved the story and I thought she’ll scream at first.

    1. Thank you so much- haha yeah I wanted to throw the reader off!

      1. Lol! Thanks. It worked well.

  59. This was soo good! I love it!

    1. Thank you so much!

  60. Sneaky twist there, I like it! Only figured it out about halfway through. Thank you for sharing, I really enjoyed the story. 😊

    1. Haha thank you and glad you enjoyed it!

  61. I was sure there was a cat in the closet, but I guess that would be weird haha. Anyway, I love that she finally gives the book a shot.

    1. Thank you so much and I can see why you would think it’s a cat- there are often cats in bookstores!

  62. I love short stories!! This is great —love your writing.
    Can’t wait to read more of what you write xxx

    1. Thank you so much!!

  63. Wow this story was amazing and I particularly like the twist at the end🤩

    1. Thank you so much!!

  64. I love this suspense.. Love the end.

    1. Thank you so much!

  65. Reading is better than seating!!

  66. Excellent indeed.

    1. Thank you!

  67. Oh, Pooja! I am always amazed and thrilled by your writing style. This one blew my mind.

    1. Thank you so much!!

  68. Reblogged this on Lifesfinewhine and commented:

    This was one of the first short stories I wrote and thought I would reblog it today.

  69. Have you ever thought about writing a book of short stories? I enjoyed reading it.

    1. I have been thinking about that lately but I’m not too sure. Thanks, I’m glad you enjoyed it.

  70. The suspense was very skilfully built up to finish off with a beautiful twist. Similar to Chekhov. Keep writing more👍.

    1. Thanks so much- glad you enjoyed it.

  71. Great story Shweta Thanks for sharing Pooja
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    Laugh It up

    1. Thanks! Just to clarify it was my story just inspired to write it thanks to Shreya’s wonderful short stories 😊

      1. Then kudos to you still a great story 🤣😂🤣 Sorry for the confusion

        1. No worries and thanks!

  72. True that books are forever. Books are like friends.

    1. Yeah I definitely think so.

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