I usually write blogging advice but as you probably know if you read yesterdays post I accidentally burnt my fingers and hand while cooking so I can’t type a lot right now and my blogging advice posts are quite detailed so they tend to be much longer. So, instead of writing a blogging advice post I decided to do something that I have wanted to do for a while now which is write a short story. I will save the blogging advice post for later on in the week when my hand/fingers are a bit more healed. I really hope you enjoy this post and if you do enjoy it please let me know in the comments below. It’s been a while since I’ve written a short story so I am very nervous about sharing this but I hope you enjoy it. I was inspired by Shweta Suresh who always writes really amazing short stories on her blog!
I quietly lie in the closet waiting for her to come home. I still remember the first time I saw her at the bookstore. She walked in with her friends, the biggest smile on her face. Her eyes eagerly moved from title to title as she looked at the books one after another. Her friends seemed bored but she just grew more excited with every summary she read. Her eyes were filled with longing as she assured her friends she would only be a few more minutes. She kept looking and I kept staring at her in awe of her beauty. She hadn’t noticed me yet- I mean why would she notice me? No one ever noticed little old me in the corner. But then something happened. Something that changed my life forever- she actually looked at me. “Well, hello there,” she whispered with a grin on her face.
Since that day I have been waiting in her closet. Waiting for her as she leaves and drinking in her beauty whenever she comes home. Sometimes she brings friends over which I always find annoying. They don’t know her like I do. They don’t love her like I do. Sometimes she brings new friends over which is even worse. They spend a couple of days together, sometimes a couple of weeks but it never lasts longer than that. They can never appreciate her like I do, they never seem to see her true value.
I can hear her opening the door, she’s talking to someone on the phone. No she’s yelling at someone on the phone… “I never want to see you again, it’s over between us, ” she yells into her phone. Goodbye Jonathan who likes sports, energy drinks and something called monster trucks. She sobs for a while on her bed and goes for a shower. She comes back in her towel and I can see her approaching the closet. She’s coming towards me, I can see her long hair dripping with water, I can smell the scent of her shampoo. I can’t take it anymore. I want her to find me, I want her to notice me, I want to hold me instead of those worthless fools she calls boyfriends. The closer she gets the more frightened I get and yet I feel excited at the same time. She open the doors and looks directly at me.
“There you are,” she sighs looking down at me. “Time to finally read this book I guess,” she mutters to herself. And now I am content because everyone knows that people come and go but book? Books are forever.
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I was wondering what was in the closet – great ending!
Thank you! Haha what did you think was in there?
My first thought was some sort of gnome! 😀
Ooh yes I can see how you would think that!
Wow, That is a different one, loved it. Looking forward to more!🙂
Thank you so much!
Hope you heal soon! This was a very cute twist!
Thank you! Haha glad you enjoyed it!
You got me on this one. I thought a puppy would be in the closet. Nice surprise ending. 😁
Haha glad you enjoyed it!
Great story! Can’t wait for more! Glad the aloe worked!!! 😁
Thank you and yes it did help a lot!!
oh yes!!! loved it!!
Thank you so much!!
I hope your finger gets healed! This is such a good read!!
Thank you so much!!
Hope you feel better! It was a great read 😊
Thank you and I feel much better today!
I hope you have speedy recovery Pooja. I loved the story and I thought she’ll scream at first.
Thank you so much- haha yeah I wanted to throw the reader off!
Lol! Thanks. It worked well.
This was soo good! I love it!
Thank you so much!
Sneaky twist there, I like it! Only figured it out about halfway through. Thank you for sharing, I really enjoyed the story. 😊
Haha thank you and glad you enjoyed it!
Whoa!
Thanks!
I was sure there was a cat in the closet, but I guess that would be weird haha. Anyway, I love that she finally gives the book a shot.
Thank you so much and I can see why you would think it’s a cat- there are often cats in bookstores!
I love short stories!! This is great —love your writing.
Can’t wait to read more of what you write xxx
Thank you so much!!
Wow this story was amazing and I particularly like the twist at the end🤩
Thank you so much!!
I love this suspense.. Love the end.
Thank you so much!
Reading is better than seating!!
Agreed!
Excellent indeed.
Thank you!
Oh, Pooja! I am always amazed and thrilled by your writing style. This one blew my mind.
Thank you so much!!
Reblogged this on Lifesfinewhine and commented:
This was one of the first short stories I wrote and thought I would reblog it today.
Have you ever thought about writing a book of short stories? I enjoyed reading it.
I have been thinking about that lately but I’m not too sure. Thanks, I’m glad you enjoyed it.
Cool!
Thanks!
The suspense was very skilfully built up to finish off with a beautiful twist. Similar to Chekhov. Keep writing more👍.
Thanks so much- glad you enjoyed it.
Great story Shweta Thanks for sharing Pooja
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Thanks! Just to clarify it was my story just inspired to write it thanks to Shreya’s wonderful short stories 😊
Then kudos to you still a great story 🤣😂🤣 Sorry for the confusion
No worries and thanks!
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True that books are forever. Books are like friends.
Yeah I definitely think so.