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Seeing The Real You- A Poem

In that moment

I saw the real you

The one you keep hidden from the world

The monster that comes out when you see red

The thing I am afraid of most

I know I usually post something about food on Fridays but I’m just not feeling it today so I’m sharing something from my drafts.

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Pooja G

27 responses to “Seeing The Real You- A Poem”

  1. Mr. Ohh's Sideways View Avatar
    Mr. Ohh’s Sideways View

    Ohh My
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    Laugh a Bit

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  2. Stacy-Ann Campbell Avatar
    Stacy-Ann Campbell

    Short but full of depth. I like it

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Thank you!

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  3. ejstoo Avatar
    ejstoo

    All people have a dark side. It isn’t necessarily the real them unless they choose not to control it and decide to continue a negative path. Some people, however, are not exactly trustworthy. That’s the hard thing to sort out.

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      I agree with you. We all have some dark parts but we have to make sure not to let them win.

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  4. Rita Avatar
    Rita

    Hit me like a brick! I just kept thinking Run! Run!

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    1. a-cute-weirdo Avatar
      a-cute-weirdo

      I thought that, too. But then I kept thinking the reaction would most likely be shock… like a deer in headlights

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      1. Rita Avatar
        Rita

        Yeah, probably. But just like when you’re watching a scary movie, there’s still that reaction. Also, I’ve been married to a monster like that. Can’t bear to see anyone else get hurt.

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      2. Pooja G Avatar
        Pooja G

        Yeah that’s the reaction I had in mind when I wrote this.

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    2. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Yeah I definitely get that reaction.

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  5. Gracee1409 Avatar
    Gracee1409

    I love these random posts. It’s really great work!

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Thanks so much!

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  6. Pj🎸 Avatar
    Pj🎸

    Very very insightful

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Thank you.

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  7. Rosa-Lynn Avatar
    Rosa-Lynn

    Interesting. In a way so is life. There are always two sides to a coin.
    I like this type of content. Makes me want to think.
    Thank you for sharing.

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Thank you and I absolutely agree. Life is not just black and white but rather grey.

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      1. Rosa-Lynn Avatar
        Rosa-Lynn

        Yes many different shades of grey. A full spectrum of it.

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        1. Pooja G Avatar
          Pooja G

          Yes definitely.

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  8. Carol Avatar
    Carol

    Excellent poem! I feel the trepidation. We all know people that can make us feel this way. Especially bad when we love them deeply.

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Thanks and yeah I think we have all been through that feeling in one way or another.

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  9. Vanya Wryter Consulting Avatar
    Vanya Wryter Consulting

    Short with much impact!

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Thanks!

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  10. Shaunelius Sterns Avatar
    Shaunelius Sterns

    Everyone has a side to them that they keep hidden from others unless it is provoked in some way to come out to the surface to be seen.

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      That’s so true. I think we all have that side no matter how happy we are.

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  12. haoyando Avatar
    haoyando

    You are sooooo right. I mean even if with a friend of many many years. I mean we can be polite and courteous for all these years and never say anything out of the strict conservative boundary of things. After a while, one just gives up on such conversations. What’s the point? If I already know the answer, there’s no point to engage in the communication. Then one day he or she can say something quite uncharacteristically fresh and good and even interesting. Real people are very very interesting. It is the facade that we use for our daily life that is really boring. However we just have to be content with it. It’s not going to change.

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Yes absolutely real people have so much more to offer. They are interesting and amusing unlike the versions of ourselves we present.

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