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Until Death Do Us Part

Candle beside their bed

Diamond gleaming on her finger

She lay there

A frown on her tortured yet beautiful face

She knew happiness

Was no longer an option she had

Because she had finally gotten what she wanted most

And it made her the saddest she had ever been

And the source of her sadness

Lay beside her sleeping peacefully

And there he would lay each night

Until death do them part

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Pooja G

64 responses to “Until Death Do Us Part”

  1. John Avatar
    John

    It never worked for me, Pooja, three divorces later, I’m done!

    Reply
    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Lol I don’t think I’m the kind of person to have a successful marriage either 😅 It’s just not for everyone in my opinion and that’s okay!

      Reply
  2. ejstoo Avatar
    ejstoo

    Obviously married to the wrong person. My parents time, they used to say that the young girl was in a hurry to go to a wedding…and some regretted after the fact. It might have worked that way at one time. Now, often they don’t try to get counselling or figure out what is wrong or if they are incompatible and separate respectfully. They go to a lot of trouble of fighting and hating and stuff. Have big expensive divorce. Not so bad if they don’t drag children into it, but if they drag children into it, can be harmful. Most respect for people who separate and even if they aren’t fond of each other, they agree to bury the hatchet and not in each others head for the good of the children. Anyway, an older person perspective of life, divorce and child rearing 😉

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Yeah I think back then marriage was something women thought was essential and they would marry people who weren’t right for them sometimes due to societal pressure and desperation.
      That’s true older couples tend to try to stick together whereas the newer generations are more likely to call it quits. Which is fine but sad when children are involved. A lot of times they feel stuck in the middle of it all.

      Reply
  3. Iswar Prasad Kar Avatar
    Iswar Prasad Kar

    Nice one

    Reply
    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Thank you

      Reply
  4. Gracee1409 Avatar
    Gracee1409

    Wow, these short stories you write are so interesting. Thanks for sharing!

    Reply
    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Thanks so much- so glad you enjoy them!

      Reply
  5. Words on Paper Avatar
    Words on Paper

    These words evoked similar strong memories and sadness of my own…

    Reply
    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Sorry to hear that. Life can be quite difficult sometimes. Hope you are in a better place now.

      Reply
  6. Binu Avatar
    Binu

    Society’s way chaining you. User your brain and find your own way

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      So true, society likes to keep us in control through things such as marriage. The best thing to do is live the life you want to.

      Reply
      1. Binu Avatar
        Binu

        It is really a tough problem, because you are surrounded by naysayers, cultural mongers and immediate family members. No one will help you or allow you to live out of the so called Best System (Marriage). I take this as an intellectual challenge. Think for yourself and you can find some decent solution’s. Good luck.

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        1. Pooja G Avatar
          Pooja G

          Yes absolutely. And good luck to you too. It’s not easy living in a way society doesn’t approve.

          Reply
  7. 716msjones Avatar
    716msjones

    Reblogged this on and commented:
    Support this Artist. FOLLOW THE LINK

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Thanks for the reblog!

      Reply
  8. Stefanie Neumann Avatar
    Stefanie Neumann

    An awful feeling aptly described, a beautiful fabric woven from words telling a sad story.

    Reply
    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Thanks so much- really appreciate that.

      Reply
  9. Ellie D Avatar
    Ellie D

    Good morning from California,

    This poem is really sad.

    Are you doing okay? Is there anything I can do for you?

    I might be able to help. At least right now.

    Please let me know.

    Ellie

    Reply
    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Good morning and thanks for checking in. I’m perfectly fine I think my poems just get a bit dark sometimes haha.

      Reply
  10. Myhealingstory Avatar
    Myhealingstory

    Love this… And feel it at a very deep level! Conveys exactly what I am going through in my blogs!

    Reply
    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Thanks so much!

      Reply
  11. TheUnknownReilly Avatar
    TheUnknownReilly

    I’m not sure how I feel about marriage anymore. I haven’t been myself, so all I have to go on is what I’ve observed from others in my family. Being married isn’t a guarantee of anything. Divorce doesn’t have to be the end of love.

    I would like to be married. But the legal system can be scary for men in America. I digress.

    The best explanation that resonates is from Hank green that I’m paraphrasing: marriage is one day at a time. Every day, each person can ask: do I want to continue on another day with this person? If you can look at them and know, yes, you have your answer.

    That advice has helped me decide about other things. Helped me get through tough days, and slow down to appreciate this day.

    Thank you for writing this Pooja! I like this introspective mood you’ve got me in. Alright, gotta write too. 😉😁

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Thanks! I personally don’t know if I’m a marriage person. I think if I find the right person maybe but it’s extremely unlikely I will ever meet someone like that.

      Reply
  12. cheryloreglia Avatar
    cheryloreglia

    Powerful words Pooja! You capture the more difficult aspects of relationships. 💕C

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Thanks so much!

      Reply
  13. Janice Reid Avatar
    Janice Reid

    I guess, be careful what you wish for 😁?

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Haha I guess so!

      Reply
  14. Shaunelius Sterns Avatar
    Shaunelius Sterns

    Sad story. She didn’t think before she said I do.

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Yes unfortunately she didn’t think her decisions through.

      Reply
  15. boosdiet Avatar
    boosdiet

    Thank you. 👍🤗

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      😊😊

      Reply
  16. Bridgette Avatar
    Bridgette

    So much said in such few words. Well done.

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Thank you so much.

      Reply
  17. Jixi Fox Avatar
    Jixi Fox

    Great words… I like the flow and the words written below. 🙂

    “A frown on her tortured yet beautiful face
    She knew happiness”

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Thank you so much. Glad you enjoyed it 🙂

      Reply
  18. haoyando Avatar
    haoyando

    That’s very philosophical. Many don’t want to admit that they are disappointed, but many are.

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Thanks. Yes, I think people hype up marriage to be more than it actually is. A lot of people are miserable they just don’t leave.

      Reply
  19. Blessing Pius Avatar
    Blessing Pius

    Hmm, so deep, marriage is a beautiful when one marries the right person. Hope to be married someday.

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Thanks and hope you have a very happy married life in the future.

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      1. Blessing Pius Avatar
        Blessing Pius

        Amen😇

        Reply
  20. Restored Heart Avatar
    Restored Heart

    That’s a frightening thought. You just sent me in to a nightmare wide awake.😂😂 Love it though!!

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Haha thanks so much and sorry about the fright 😅

      Reply
  21. lblooom Avatar
    lblooom

    Sad and beautiful poem. People talk so much about bad or unfulfilling relationships, but once they’re married, it seems like they don’t feel they’re allowed to talk about it anymore. Love this post.

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Thanks so much. Yeah there seems to be a lot of pressure to be happy after marriage which isn’t fair since a lot of people are not.

      Reply
  22. Cindy Georgakas Avatar
    Cindy Georgakas

    Oh how horrible this worse torture sounds like! Yet I suppose so many grin and Barrett in just this way. Nice job Pooja

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Yeah unfortunately it can be like that. Thanks!

      Reply
      1. Cindy Georgakas Avatar
        Cindy Georgakas

        I know right tis true but good to get out when needed!

        Reply
  23. Cailín Rúnda Avatar
    Cailín Rúnda

    Yes, laying and watching eyes wide open. Filled with a loneliness and despair that knew no limts. Somethings in life are not to be. …

    Reply
    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      💔💔

      Reply
  24. Kimberlee Robinson Avatar
    Kimberlee Robinson

    Whew! I love it!

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Thanks!

      Reply
  25. LaShelle Avatar
    LaShelle

    Wow profoundly thoughtful! It really goes to show you that you have to be careful in your choice of a spouse

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Thanks and yes absolutely.

      Reply
  26. Susi Bocks Avatar
    Susi Bocks

    Divorce is always an option!

    Reply
    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      A much easier option lol!

      Reply
      1. Susi Bocks Avatar
        Susi Bocks

        Indeed! 😉

        Reply
  27. DEVANG UPADHYAYA Avatar
    DEVANG UPADHYAYA

    I really like how you are so swift in working in different genre/niche. Your work is very smooth. Your style is so efficient, it works effectively for various genre. Best wishes Pooja.

    Reply
    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Thank you so much. I really appreciate that.

      Reply
      1. DEVANG UPADHYAYA Avatar
        DEVANG UPADHYAYA

        Learning a lot from you daily. There’s so much from you that I have to read. Please do not mind the notifications. One thing, I’ve felt in your blogs that although some of your blogs are long but these never get mundane. You know how to enchant the readers.

        Reply
        1. Pooja G Avatar
          Pooja G

          Thanks so much. I’m glad the longer posts are still interesting.

          Reply
  28. kanchan Avatar
    kanchan

    Well, then we are in same boat 😄

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Haha 😂

      Reply
  29. kanchan Avatar
    kanchan

    Its not for me as well

    Reply

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