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Ecstasy Of The Heart

Forever Mine

I sit beside you

As you run your fingers through my hair

I slowly bite my lip

And tilt my head back

Closing my eyes

Smile on my face

You must be my Heaven

Or my personal Hell

Either way

Only one way to tell

Usually someone gets murdered at some point of my poems so this one was a little out of the blue for me. But that’s what my brain came up with today. It’s all the Lana Del Rey I’ve been listening to. I promise never to write anything this cheesy again. Enjoy, I guess?

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Pooja G

45 responses to “Ecstasy Of The Heart”

  1. Poet of the Light Avatar
    Poet of the Light

    Awww, I love cheese! 😉

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Haha we all need a little cheese in our life! 😜

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      1. Poet of the Light Avatar
        Poet of the Light

        Now we’re talking!!

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  2. Iswar Prasad Kar Avatar
    Iswar Prasad Kar

    This is really a nice one.. loved it

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Thanks so much.

      Reply
  3. ejstoo Avatar
    ejstoo

    Nice that no one had to die in the poem. I prefer less death and stuff. Was a good poem!

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Thanks! Maybe I’ll do poems like this once in a while too.

      Reply
  4. WebbBlogs Avatar
    WebbBlogs

    This was great. By the way, I like cheese 😁😁

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Thanks haha 😜😊

      Reply
  5. DEVANG UPADHYAYA Avatar
    DEVANG UPADHYAYA

    A well written poem!
    Love it. It was smooth.
    A great chance of tone

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    1. DEVANG UPADHYAYA Avatar
      DEVANG UPADHYAYA

      *change 😅, see we need edit option

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      1. Pooja G Avatar
        Pooja G

        We honestly really do!

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    2. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Thank you so much.

      Reply
  6. Gracee1409 Avatar
    Gracee1409

    Tbh, i was expecting a murder story when I clicked on this post. But I have nothing to complain about, this is so beautiful!

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Haha yeah my stories do tend to be like that but thought I would try something new. Just as shocking I hope! 😂

      Reply
  7. Vidah Avatar
    Vidah

    That was beautiful!
    You should write these kind of pieces more often. 😊

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Thanks so much! 😊

      Reply
  8. Saudah Avatar
    Saudah

    Love it!!!!!!

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Thank you!

      Reply
  9. #tamakastudio Avatar
    #tamakastudio

    ecstasy

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Indeed

      Reply
  10. Rita Avatar
    Rita

    I don’t think it’s cheesy! I think it’s awesome! Don’t censor yourself.

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Aww thanks so much!

      Reply
  11. Daily Poetry Avatar
    Daily Poetry

    Some cheesiness now and then is okay. Don’t limit your writing. It’s imagery was vivid. Thanks for sharing and have a nice day!

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Thanks so much and have a nice day too!

      Reply
  12. haoyando Avatar
    haoyando

    Love the ending. Often love cannot fit in the rigid social and personal structure of life.

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Thank you and yes I absolutely agree.

      Reply
  13. Stacey Guenther Avatar
    Stacey Guenther

    A very good loving poem.

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Thanks so much.

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      1. Stacey Guenther Avatar
        Stacey Guenther

        You’re very welcome!

        Reply
  14. Cindy Georgakas Avatar
    Cindy Georgakas

    Oh I liked it.. you know me; I don’t like anything without cheese or if it’s too scary! 💕😂😅

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Well this is perfect then 😂

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      1. Cindy Georgakas Avatar
        Cindy Georgakas

        😂😂😂

        Reply
  15. ExploringtheYouniverse222 Avatar
    ExploringtheYouniverse222

    Love the ending!

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Thank you!

      Reply
  16. Lokesh Sastya Avatar
    Lokesh Sastya

    It’s straight. I liked the way you delivered this poem. 👌✨

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Thank you very much. ☺

      Reply
  17. Butterfly Avatar
    Butterfly

    Nice post 😄

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Thank you 😊

      Reply
      1. Butterfly Avatar
        Butterfly

        My pleasure 😄
        Have a fantastic day!!
        Butterfly 🦋

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        1. Pooja G Avatar
          Pooja G

          Thanks and you too 😄

          Reply
  18. LUH Avatar
    LUH

    Cheese is always a good idea❤

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Aww thanks 💕

      Reply
  19. chakaza Avatar
    chakaza

    What’s life without a little cheese now & again…love it.

    Reply
    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Haha thank you.

      Reply

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