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Our Utopia- A Poem

My Safe Haven

Our utopia quickly turned sour

The moment your lips touched hers

You’re still under the impression that you hold the power

But our baby is actually your brothers

You messed with the wrong woman

Because now I plan your death every night

One day I’ll be holding your gun

And you won’t be able to even put up a fight

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Pooja G

42 responses to “Our Utopia- A Poem”

  1. trE Avatar
    trE

    Whoa! I felt this!

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Haha thank you, I think?

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      1. trE Avatar
        trE

        Lol. All good things. All good things. Lol.

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        1. Pooja G Avatar
          Pooja G

          😂😊🙏

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  2. ejstoo Avatar
    ejstoo

    I think I’d say someone really needs to get out and find a new relationship, because that’s totally going to create a lot of confusion down the road. Murder is totally a bad idea. I mean, where do you stop at…we found with the Nova Scotia Mass Murder thing…it gets messy, there is a big inquest. People point fingers and blame each other…and it ends up in a big argument and no one wins. Just my take on that stuff. https://masscasualtycommission.ca/ Just a thought 😉 I cannot even consider what kind of family drama that would create. 😉

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Haha yes it can be too much drama- divorce is a much easier option that people seem to forget for some reason 😂

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      1. ejstoo Avatar
        ejstoo

        Less trouble for the children too 😉

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  3. Mr. Ohh's Sideways View Avatar
    Mr. Ohh’s Sideways View

    Very nice
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    Laugh On

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Thanks!

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  4. Cindy Georgakas Avatar
    Cindy Georgakas

    Not messing with you girl!
    😂😂

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Haha 😂😂😂

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      1. Cindy Georgakas Avatar
        Cindy Georgakas

        🙈🙉😂

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  5. Gracee1409 Avatar
    Gracee1409

    This is so good!

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Thank you!

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  6. DEVANG UPADHYAYA Avatar
    DEVANG UPADHYAYA

    I definitely enjoyed it. This shows how versatile you are. You work really well with multiple genre/niche.
    If I talk about a week, then you give a variety of content. Sometimes your blogs are humourous. Sometimes they are informative. Sometimes motivating. Sometimes horrifying. Sometimes thought Provoking. I really enjoy reading your content and I learn a lot from you and your work.

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Thank you so much. I do enjoy writing horror more than anything when it comes to poetry or short stories. Glad you’re enjoying my posts.

      Reply
  7. Carl Setzer Avatar
    Carl Setzer

    Only mildly disturbing.

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Oh good, I didn’t want it to be too horrifying.

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  8. Daily Poetry Avatar
    Daily Poetry

    A dark poem, you are multi talented. Handling different genres is quite impressive. Thanks for sharing and have a nice day!

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Thanks so much and have a nice day too!

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  9. reeydah Avatar
    reeydah

    This just goes to prove that you dont mess with a woman. You just don’t. Amazing poem

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Yup, never mess with women. Ever. Thank you.

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  10. Saudah Avatar
    Saudah

    Whoa!!!

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      😄

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  11. Janice Reid Avatar
    Janice Reid

    Vicious 😂!

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Thank you 😂😂

      Reply
  12. Makeup accessories Avatar
    Makeup accessories

    Wow 😂💕 love this post 😍

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Thank you 😊

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  13. Marsha Avatar
    Marsha

    Disturbing was a good word. Hmmm. It’s definitely moving and attention riviting.

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Thank you. I was going for attention riveting.

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      1. Marsha Avatar
        Marsha

        You won! 🙂

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        1. Pooja G Avatar
          Pooja G

          Thanks 😄

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  14. Sarah Samuel Avatar
    Sarah Samuel

    This was out of the blue. Good job 👍👍

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Haha thanks.

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  15. Blessing Pius Avatar
    Blessing Pius

    Nice post👌

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Thank you 😊

      Reply
  16. Shaunelius Sterns Avatar
    Shaunelius Sterns

    Nice drama, but she seems to be a psychopath. She should just move on with her life.

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Yes, some people hold grudges for too long.

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  17. haoyando Avatar
    haoyando

    Haha, that is so funny and dramatic and horrific. I’ve seen relationships like that. Unfortunately it is not as rare as we tend to think. Family is supposed to be the place to offer comfort and love, but it can very well be the exact opposite.

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Lol thank you. Yes, family can be the source of our happiness but sometimes it can also be the source of all our problems.

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  18. Harnoor Kaur Gulati Avatar
    Harnoor Kaur Gulati

    A good way to intimidate those who have deceived 😅

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Haha for real 😂

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