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I Wanted To Write You A Poem

I wanted to write you a poem 
But I could never find the words 
That described just how much I love you 
Until I lost you 
And now the words never stop flowing 
And each poem I write 
Haunts me day and night

Is anyone as awful at coming up with headings as I am? Because honestly it’s like pulling out a tooth finding a good title.

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80 responses to “I Wanted To Write You A Poem”

  1. Kingston The Barber Avatar
    Kingston The Barber

    U the shit!! I just want you to know 🗣🧠🧠

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Haha thank you!!

      Reply
  2. A & J PEI Treasures/E Jean Simpson, BEd, BA, MA Avatar
    A & J PEI Treasures/E Jean Simpson, BEd, BA, MA

    Sad….
    Hard when it is fresh…but over time people often can get to….

    “‘Tis better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all.”
    Alfred Lord Tennyson

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      So true, I definitely agree.

      Reply
  3. John Avatar
    John

    Nah, I never have trouble coming up with titles, and my blog has over 7000 posts. 😂

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Lol I need to learn from you 😂

      Reply
  4. At Home with Joanna Avatar
    At Home with Joanna

    Titles/Headlines can sometimes be harder than writing the actual content! I can understand the struggle.

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Right?? Sometimes I sturggle more with the title than anything else!

      Reply
  5. DEVANG UPADHYAYA Avatar
    DEVANG UPADHYAYA

    Love the poem!
    Tells the inner feelings properly.
    .
    And yes, I do find it troublesome for heading/title of the blogs.
    I feel like I want to give people an apposite information within the heading itself. But, that happens rarely. I want headings, which are informative as well as arouse curiosity. 🙂
    .
    I like your headings btw, always makes me curious.

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Thank you so much!

      Yes, headings can be difficult. I’m so glad you like mine but I’m still not super satisfied with them lol.

      Reply
      1. DEVANG UPADHYAYA Avatar
        DEVANG UPADHYAYA

        Well readers are satisfied, that’s enough 😝
        This could be a blog idea for you.
        “How to make perfect/Catcy heading?”

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        1. Pooja G Avatar
          Pooja G

          That’s a good idea thanks!

          Reply
  6. Shahzad Khalid Avatar
    Shahzad Khalid

    Nyc poem… Chaha tha kuch ashaar(poem) apke yaad mein likhon, per kabhi ap nahi milte , kabhi alfaaz nahi milte…

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Thank you 😊

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      1. Shahzad Khalid Avatar
        Shahzad Khalid

        Welcome dear! So u can understand urdu/Hindi?

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        1. Pooja G Avatar
          Pooja G

          Yes, partly.

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          1. Shahzad Khalid Avatar
            Shahzad Khalid

            That is nyc

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  7. TheUnknownReilly Avatar
    TheUnknownReilly

    You haven’t lost anything 🙂😉

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Hehe happy to hear that 😜

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      1. TheUnknownReilly Avatar
        TheUnknownReilly

        😂👀

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  8. Shaunelius Sterns Avatar
    Shaunelius Sterns

    I never have a problem with headings and titles of poetry, or whatever I am writing about. It just comes to me naturally. Nice poem. Thanks for sharing.

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Wow, you’re really lucky with that. Thanks so much.

      Reply
  9. Daily Poetry Avatar
    Daily Poetry

    Reblogged this on Daily poetry and commented:
    Pain of lost love beautifully described…

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Thanks so much for the reblog.

      Reply
  10. Daily Poetry Avatar
    Daily Poetry

    Wonderful poem. It deals with lost love in a vivid way.

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Thanks so much!

      Reply
  11. haoyando Avatar
    haoyando

    Oh, I miss old friends. LOL. I often regret that I was not more open to my friends in talking my own trouble before. I think I regret about that a lot.

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Yeah, often we regret things we didn’t say rather than what we did say.

      Reply
  12. Geoff Stamper Avatar
    Geoff Stamper

    Splendid poem. So true.

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Thank you so much.

      Reply
  13. Quantez Xihuitl Avatar
    Quantez Xihuitl

    with a title after I’m done, I’m unsure if that’s the right way … 🤷🏽‍♂️

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      I usually find the title after I’m done too but I still struggle lol 😆

      Reply
  14. Jeremy Kamwaro Avatar
    Jeremy Kamwaro

    Find someone else hehe

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      That works too lol

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      1. Jeremy Kamwaro Avatar
        Jeremy Kamwaro

        Haha I know, but love is what it is. Very emotional

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        1. Pooja G Avatar
          Pooja G

          Haha true.

          Reply
  15. Saima.SK Avatar
    Saima.SK

    Nice poem, Pooja 💕👍🙂

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Thanks so much 😊

      Reply
  16. Saudah Avatar
    Saudah

    ♥ ❤️ ♥️

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      😊💕

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  17. Abigail Mensah Avatar
    Abigail Mensah

    Let others know how much love you have for them. You never know when you will never see them again.

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Yes, absolutely. Say it while you can.

      Reply
  18. reeydah Avatar
    reeydah

    You’re making me fall in love with poetry all over again, Pooja. Beautiful

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Thank you so much, poetry is truly the best form of expression for so many.

      Reply
  19. Becoming a Ruby Avatar
    Becoming a Ruby

    beautiful!!

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Thanks 😊

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      1. Becoming a Ruby Avatar
        Becoming a Ruby

        You’re more than welcome! Hope you read and enjoy my posts as well! If you have feed back. Please don’t hesitate to let me know

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        1. Pooja G Avatar
          Pooja G

          Will do!

          Reply
  20. Silver Stone Avatar
    Silver Stone

    The poem is great! Don’t sweat about the title, it actually suits the poem. It makes it all the better!

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Thanks so much, I appreciate that! I was a little on the fence with the title for this one but I’m happy to hear that.

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      1. Silver Stone Avatar
        Silver Stone

        You’re welcome!

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  21. Qonyike Avatar
    Qonyike

    Lovely poem 🥰. Titles are hard. Uhmm, try “Tales of the heart”☺️❤️

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Ooh I love that 😍 Mind if I use it for my next poem?

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      1. Qonyike Avatar
        Qonyike

        No, I don’t mind🥰

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        1. Pooja G Avatar
          Pooja G

          Thank you 😊

          Reply
  22. Kirsten Avatar
    Kirsten

    I agree with you, finding a title is harder than writing the actual content sometimes haha. Yours works well though, and I love the poem. Very relatable feelings expressed. 💞

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Lol it’s really like that sometimes. Thanks so much 😊

      Reply
      1. Kirsten Avatar
        Kirsten

        My pleasure! 😊

        Reply
  23. Rohak Jain Avatar
    Rohak Jain

    This was so cool, I read through some of your other articles and really enjoy your poetry! As a fellow blogger, it’s also awesome to see how organized and easy-to-follow everything is. Keep up the great work!

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Thank you so much, really appreciate it!

      Reply
  24. Belladonna Avatar
    Belladonna

    I know this feeling. Great poem Pooja!

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Thanks so much!

      Reply
  25. Nicole Smith Avatar
    Nicole Smith

    When I was a teenager my godmother passed from cancer. I never was brave enough to tell her how I felt and how much I admired her. Since then, I am excellent at telling people what they mean to me. I learned the hard way once, and now I make sure those that I love know it. I loved this poem.

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      I’m sorry to hear about that but I’m so glad you were able to change and are now more open about how you feel. It’s so important to tell people how we feel before it’s too late.

      Reply
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  27. Evocative Verses Avatar
    Evocative Verses

    So simple yet such deep meaning! Absolutely beautiful.

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Thank you so much!

      Reply
  28. Frederick Phoenix Avatar
    Frederick Phoenix

    Beautiful 💘

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Thank you ☺️

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      1. Frederick Phoenix Avatar
        Frederick Phoenix

        You’re welcome darling. ^^

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        1. Pooja G Avatar
          Pooja G

          😊

          Reply
  29. dustyreviewer Avatar
    dustyreviewer

    It is a strange truth that regret is often the key we need to unlocking our feelings.

    Great poem!

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Thanks so much and yes absolutely!

      Reply
  30. Cindy Georgakas Avatar
    Cindy Georgakas

    Love it… !
    How about Lost and Found! 💖💖

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Love that!!

      Reply
  31. Cheryl Kurtz Avatar
    Cheryl Kurtz

    Title? The Haunt of the Unrequited Poem? I’d be interested in some of the words that “never stop flowing” because I think the poem could be a little longer with a few details; sort of like maybe this:

    I wanted to write you a poem
    but the lub-dub of you heart was not a word
    and I didn’t know the name of the flowers you gave me
    and when you pulled me from the river
    I had no words beyond hugs

    I wanted to write you a poem
    when the birds sang to us in the park

    I could never find the words to sing, to laugh, to moan
    until I lost you… [etc.]

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Wow, I love that title and what you added.

      Reply
  32. Neeraj Avatar
    Neeraj

    beautiful yet sad. it was really good 🙂

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Thank you so much 🙂

      Reply
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