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Love’s Trigger

A Classic Love Story
I can't seem to stop thinking of you

I can't close my eyes 

Without seeing your smile

Your laugh

Your sparkling eyes

And the way you looked

When I found you with her

And you saw the gun in my hand

Love sure can trigger

The worst in us...

Once more, I am unable to find a fitting title for this poem but this one will have to do for now. I sort of hate it but I hate it the least from all the other titles I’ve come up with so far so I’m just going to go with it. Please give me some title ideas in the comments and my favourite one will win a million dollars! In hugs and not actual money…

Edit: I loved ALL your title ideas but in the end Tre won with “Love’s Trigger.” 🤗

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Pooja G

102 responses to “Love’s Trigger”

  1. John Avatar
    John

    I think the title is very fitting, Pooja!

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Thanks, I’m glad to hear that!

      Reply
      1. Odanwusamson Avatar
        Odanwusamson

        The title is fitting.its exceptional

        Reply
  2. People Rebuilders Foundation Avatar
    People Rebuilders Foundation

    Just call it can’t. Maybe even memories

    Daniel Waller People Rebuilders Foundation 1675 Ansel Rd. Cleveland, Ohio 44106 Suite#1228

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Those are both great suggestions, thank you.

      Reply
  3. Author Melissa Crismon Avatar
    Author Melissa Crismon

    The title scared me. I thought you were saying goodbye to us on WP. I would call it Trigger or Love Sure Can Trigger, but I always title things as short as I can so they are easy to read online. So Trigger. And the word trigger is on trend these days. Do I win a million hugs?

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    1. DEVANG UPADHYAYA Avatar
      DEVANG UPADHYAYA

      I wroth the same thing. The title scared me too 😅.
      How about Triggering love?
      Or love trigger? 😛

      Reply
      1. Author Melissa Crismon Avatar
        Author Melissa Crismon

        So many young people use the word trigger as a “safe” word that I try not to get triggered by it. 😛

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        1. DEVANG UPADHYAYA Avatar
          DEVANG UPADHYAYA

          Here trigger can be of 2 meaning
          1: getting triggered- riled up
          2 or the trigger of the gun.
          Which one do you suggest? 😅

          Reply
    2. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Sorry about that, it seems I scared quite a few people with my title. I had scheduled it a while back and forgot about yesterdays post lol. Those are great title ideas so yes, you get a million hugs coming your way!

      Reply
      1. Author Melissa Crismon Avatar
        Author Melissa Crismon

        A million hugs back!

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        1. Pooja G Avatar
          Pooja G

          💖

          Reply
  4. trE Avatar
    trE

    “Love’s Trigger.”

    And I love the poem!

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      I love that- you win the hugs!

      Reply
      1. trE Avatar
        trE

        Haha. All right now! I love hugs! Lol. Thank you! 👏🏾🙌🏾👌🏾

        Reply
        1. Pooja G Avatar
          Pooja G

          😊🤗

          Reply
  5. John Stephen Walsh Avatar
    John Stephen Walsh

    One Bullet?
    Two Bullets?
    No Bullets Left?

    Something closer to the actual imagery in the poem. Specific details.

    Looking forward to your final choice.

    Reply
    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Those are good ideas, thanks so much.

      Reply
  6. Poet of the Light Avatar
    Poet of the Light

    “Finito” Italian for … finished. 😉

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Hmm interesting, I like it a lot 😊

      Reply
  7. Athousandbitsofpaper Avatar
    Athousandbitsofpaper

    Some people really leave their mark on our consciousness – beautifully captured Pooja

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Absolutely and thank you so much.

      Reply
  8. DEVANG UPADHYAYA Avatar
    DEVANG UPADHYAYA

    “Painful affection” , “I love you, till you die” , “till the death do us apart “, “love cannot kill, but gun do” 🤪
    .
    Your title gave me heart attack. I thought you are extremely pissed with the wp. 😨
    .
    Hey, btw, I have a title suggetion if you can work a poem on it, that would be cool. 😛
    “Magic in the rain”
    “Apocalypse”
    “Unforgivable love”
    “Love is magic, but I don’t believe in fantasy “.
    Sorry, I’m just in a fun mood 😅

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    1. RieSheridanRose Avatar
      RieSheridanRose

      I know! I had to open it real quick and make sure she wasn’t shutting things down…lol

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    2. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Those are all great titles. 😬

      Lol sorry about that, I noticed I scared a few people in the comments with that title- didn’t realise it wasn’t the best idea after yesterdays post 😂

      Those are great too, I’ll keep them in mind for future poems 😊

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      1. DEVANG UPADHYAYA Avatar
        DEVANG UPADHYAYA

        I swear, I was terrified. I saw the notification and I thought you took some dangerous decision. Dude at wp pissed you too much 😅

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        1. Pooja G Avatar
          Pooja G

          Lol I’m not going anywhere unless I get kicked out 😂

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          1. DEVANG UPADHYAYA Avatar
            DEVANG UPADHYAYA

            You getting kicked out of wp
            Is like sun getting kicked out of the space. ☀️
            Kindly keep sharing

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            1. Pooja G Avatar
              Pooja G

              I’ve been kicked out before, this is my second blog 😂

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              1. DEVANG UPADHYAYA Avatar
                DEVANG UPADHYAYA

                I have so many questions regarding that 😱. I will ask them in your next guiding blog.

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                1. Pooja G Avatar
                  Pooja G

                  Lol no worries 😂

                  Reply
  9. Kirsten Avatar
    Kirsten

    Love this poem. Love Trigger seems to work as a title too. 🙂

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      That’s a good idea, thank you 😊

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      1. Kirsten Avatar
        Kirsten

        My pleasure! 🙂

        Reply
  10. Dee Min Avatar
    Dee Min

    I think your title is fitting Pooja. Another option could be Trigger!
    I get from this piece that there truly is a thin line between love and hate. It’s raw and vulnerable. Good one.

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Thanks so much and that’s a good idea!

      Reply
  11. Stacy-Ann Campbell Avatar
    Stacy-Ann Campbell

    Triggered by Love

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Great suggestion.

      Reply
  12. RieSheridanRose Avatar
    RieSheridanRose

    Modern Romance…?

    Reply
    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Ooh that’s a good one!

      Reply
  13. Vidah Avatar
    Vidah

    Loved this, Pooja.
    Keep writing👏

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Thank you so much. 😊

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      1. Vidah Avatar
        Vidah

        You’re welcome!!

        Reply
  14. Binu Avatar
    Binu

    Nice. strong emotions catch up in the line.

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Thank you so much.

      Reply
  15. Doer Mindset Avatar
    Doer Mindset

    Aww so romantic and sad! Love it. As a title, I would say maybe: “Pulled my Trigger” or “Please Renounce My Mind”

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Thanks so much and those are great suggestions!

      Reply
  16. reeydah Avatar
    reeydah

    Love this cause it reminds me of a song I once was obsessed with, but this is a simpler version. Also, “The Trigger” is a nice title. I think.

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Thank you and that’s a great title idea.

      Reply
  17. Saudah Avatar
    Saudah

    Love the poem!!!!

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Thanks so much!!

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      1. Saudah Avatar
        Saudah

        ♥ ❤️ ♥️

        Reply
  18. Akshitagupta Avatar
    Akshitagupta

    Loved the poem.. Keep sharing us more poems…

    Reply
    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Thank you so much 😊

      Reply
  19. Helen Avatar
    Helen

    Gees Pooja don’t do that to me! I saw “Goodbye” and your blog name on the Reader and I literally stopped chewing my breakfast, I was like “wait, WHAT?” Lol. I’m thinking “Final Thoughts” or “Our Final Moments” but I’m still pre-caffeine so you could still have plenty of good ideas from other sources.

    Also definitely didn’t just reveal how dark and twisted I can be 🤣

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Lol sorry! I’m just realising after reading all the comments that the title wasn’t the best after yesterdays post 😂 See, I told y’all I sucked at titles 😜

      We all have a dark twisted side 😉

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      1. Helen Avatar
        Helen

        Ah no, perhaps not your finest hour 😂

        Oh I know, but like you said, it’s what makes life more fun 😉

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        1. Pooja G Avatar
          Pooja G

          Haha very true! 😜

          Reply
  20. Baban Zarah Avatar
    Baban Zarah

    Good Afternoon

    Baban Zarah Na Kauran Bauchi Tv – Chat @ Spike

    Reply
    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Good afternoon.

      Reply
  21. Pennize Pics Avatar
    Pennize Pics

    I enjoyed this poem even though it touched home for me. I might title it, “Death And Deception”. What do you think?

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Thanks so much and I love that title idea.

      Reply
  22. Qonyike Avatar
    Qonyike

    Love does make us do weird things. And your poems are just❤️🔥🔥🔥

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      It sure does and thank you so much 😊❤️

      Reply
  23. Kevin Avatar
    Kevin

    Powerful stuff! My title suggestion would be “Till Death do us Part’

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Thanks so much, and I was actually thinking that till I realised I have another poem with the same name!

      Reply
  24. mic Avatar
    mic

    🤔….Lilith’s choice

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Ooh that’s a good one 🤔

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      1. mic Avatar
        mic

        I’d bear the blue sky for a hug🌹🤗

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        1. Pooja G Avatar
          Pooja G

          Sending lots of hugs your way 🤗

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          1. mic Avatar
            mic

            🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🌹🌌 Thank You so much dear Pooja🌈🤗🌹

            Reply
            1. Pooja G Avatar
              Pooja G

              🤗🤗🤗

              Reply
  25. Belladonna Avatar
    Belladonna

    Love can make you act strange as hell!!!

    Reply
    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      It sure can!

      Reply
  26. cheryloreglia Avatar
    cheryloreglia

    Nice one Pooja! Broken comes to mind. xxoo, C

    Reply
    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Thanks and that’s a great suggestion.

      Reply
  27. Cindy Georgakas Avatar
    Cindy Georgakas

    oooh love the story and the play on words. hmmmmm

    -straight to the heart
    -Heartsick
    -No turning back
    -Bullseye

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    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Thank you and those are awesome suggestions!

      Reply
      1. Cindy Georgakas Avatar
        Cindy Georgakas

        You’re welcome. Yours is still the best. but maybe it will help somehow.. 💖

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        1. Pooja G Avatar
          Pooja G

          Aww thanks! I think your suggestions and everyone else’s are much better 😊

          Reply
          1. Cindy Georgakas Avatar
            Cindy Georgakas

            We always think that about our work-:(. But feedback is great!!

            Reply
            1. Pooja G Avatar
              Pooja G

              True, we’re always harsh on ourselves but yeah feedback helps!

              Reply
  28. haoyando Avatar
    haoyando

    You remind me of those stories in the news, in which a gun shot is the final farewell of a love…

    Reply
    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Yeah there are so many of those stories. Sometimes I wonder if murder is really easier than a breakup or divorce. I never understand why people take that option.

      Reply
  29. TheUnknownReilly Avatar
    TheUnknownReilly

    Trigger warning

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    1. TheUnknownReilly Avatar
      TheUnknownReilly

      As the title 😉

      Reply
      1. Pooja G Avatar
        Pooja G

        That’s a good one 😊

        Reply
  30. Happy Panda Avatar
    Happy Panda

    Beautifully written 🤷

    Reply
    1. Happy Panda Avatar
      Happy Panda

      👏👏👏*
      Stupid WP that doesn’t let you edit comments 😒

      Reply
      1. Pooja G Avatar
        Pooja G

        We really need that edit feature 😂

        Reply
    2. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Thank you! 😊

      Reply
  31. Mthobisi Magagula Avatar
    Mthobisi Magagula

    Wow, Romance here is in the air. Such a lovely and emotional poem about love😍🔥🔥💯

    Reply
    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Thank you so much 😊

      Reply
  32. dustyreviewer Avatar
    dustyreviewer

    This is great. I didn’t see your twist coming again!

    Reply
    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Haha, yeah I do like twist endings!

      Reply
      1. dustyreviewer Avatar
        dustyreviewer

        You don’t do them so much that I expect to see them coming. So you managed to surprise me twice in a row. That said, twist endings are great and you do a great job with them! I always enjoy your writing.

        Reply
        1. Pooja G Avatar
          Pooja G

          Thanks so much, so glad you enjoy my posts!

          Reply
          1. dustyreviewer Avatar
            dustyreviewer

            You’re welcome! Thank you for sharing it.

            Reply
            1. Pooja G Avatar
              Pooja G

              My pleasure!

              Reply
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  34. threadbee Avatar
    threadbee

    on point.

    Reply
    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      Thanks

      Reply

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