Goodbye- A Poem

Awkward silence

Ignored advances

Hidden tears

Lost love

Time to say goodbye

Time to go

“Goodbye” is a poem that first appeared on Lifesfinewhine. I think about endings and beginnings a lot. And this poem is about the end of a longterm relationship. And the emotions that come along with this ending. Relationships are difficult and complicated as it is. And I am not someone who is very good at long-term relationships. I tend to shut down when things get serious and find it difficult to stay excited about the relationship once it gets older. Those feelings are what inspired this poem.

How do you feel about goodbyes? And how do you feel about ending? Do you believe endings lead to new beginnings? Or are you devastated when something ends? Let me know in the comments below because I am very curious about your thoughts and would love to hear your answers on this topic. Or simply stop by and say hi!

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60 responses to “Goodbye- A Poem”

  1. Hi ya Pooja, I always like your work you put so much feeling into them.
    How are things?

    1. Thank you so much Simon!
      I’m doing good how are you??

      1. I’m going to be good in a few minutes as I’m knocking off work. What are you up to these days? 🙂

        1. Hehe that’s awesome!
          I’m finally done with my Visa application so now I’m looking for a place to stay. You??

          1. You’ve been accepted? Well done! I’m sure you’ll find somewhere. Which part of Canada are you going to?

            1. Lol no not yet I’m still waiting but I’m looking for a place to stay when I do get accepted! I’ll be going to Ontario (St. Catharines)

              1. Lots of exiting stuff happening for you then eh? I hope it all works out for you 🙂

                1. Yes terrifying and exciting! Thanks! 🙂

                  1. You’re very brave Pooja 🙂

                    1. Lol no I’m just scared very easily 😂

                    2. Not you surely? 😉

                    3. Lol definitely!

  2. This one hits right in the feels. I guess most of us have felt this way some day in life.

    Come visit us soon.

    1. Yeah I think we have always been here at some point.
      I will!!

  3. Both the poetry and sketch convey a lot of emotional feelings, Pooja!!

    1. Thank you so much! The sketch isn’t mine but I thought it would be perfect for this post!

      1. Ok. But both of them complement each other very well!!

        1. Thank you!!

  4. Well crafted!Hope things are fine with you.

    1. Thank you! Yeah I’m fine this was mainly just my imagination!

      1. Oh glad it was fiction.
        Much love to you.

        1. Thanks! 💖💖

  5. This speaks to me

    1. It’s unfortunate but I guess we’ve all been there.

  6. Speaks to me of that moment when you take your life back. Empowering, positive yet sad.

    I also love the sketch.

    1. Thank you! Yeah empowering but once you get over the sadness you realise that it was something you needed to do and the relationship wasn’t going anywhere.
      It’s not my sketch but it seems to really great with the poem!

  7. Beautiful and very moving. Incredible how much emotion is felt in so few words.

    1. Thank you so much!

      1. You’re so welcome! 😀

  8. Beautiful! Matches my mood. Sometimes want to say goodbye just to hurt myself. But must stay.

    1. Thank you! Yeah I understand what you mean. I’m a self sabotager too.

  9. It’s sad… but beautifully written, Pooja.

    1. Thank you so much Christy!

  10. Thank you for your blog. It is so very interesting. But i fear we’ll have part ways if you haven’t subscribed to or registered with

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    1. Yeah I subscribed!

      1. Thank you

  11. I have been commenting your blog by using my address … wordpress/mikerana … but I have changed this email address and also there is a new mysite. So if you want to receive further my comments it will be a better option to register with
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    Otherwise we might miss each other’s contact

    1. Alright I’ll subscribe to it!

  12. Thank you

  13. Thank you for your blog. It is so very interesting. But i fear we’ll have part ways if you haven’t subscribed to or registered with

    The current connection is with WordPress/ Mikerana. This will be terminated in 2 weeks time.

    I do not want to lose you

    mike rana 88518 74466

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  14. A very beautiful piece!

    1. Thank you!!

  15. Nice one Pooja

    1. Thank you!

  16. Holy shit, look at you getting over 123 likes on this post!
    I thought this post about something else until I realized it was a poem.
    I have noticed that poetry is very popular on this site , like seriously, I might be following more poets than anything else. lol


    1. Haha yeah it’s insane! Poetry is super popular on WP I follow so many people who do poetry too! I’m pretty sure majority of the people I follow either do poetry or makeup!
      Lol did you think I was leaving blogging forever?!? Lol you wish 😂😂😜😜

      1. Hahah!
        Yes, I figured you were leaving blogging, lol I was like “hell yes” – no more followers for her! lmao

        1. Lol I knew it!!!

  17. Great poem and beautiful drawing.

    1. Thank you so much!!

  18. Very deep but real and beautiful!!

    1. Thank you!!

  19. This was so beautiful and meaningful, <3 Perfect words!

    1. Thank you so much! I haven’t had many heartbreaks but I have a crazy imagination 😂

  20. Such beautiful lines and heartbreaking feelings for a very lovely art ♥

    1. Thank you ❤❤

  21. wow…. few but deep

    1. Thank you!

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