“Please… please just leave,” she whispered.
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wow – this could go in so many directions! well done.
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I guess that’s her objective. We just need to add the cat, umbrella, tall stranger, a rough sea at the promenade and the story grows.
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I didn’t even think about the cat angle! 🙂
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Thank you so much!
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You are very talented.
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Thank you so much!
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Hehehe came here to escape social media.
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Lol we all need a break from social media sometimes!
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Have a Nice Day and weekend dear!
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Thanks you too!
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ThnQ dear!💋
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You’re welcome!
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Atmospheric!
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Thank you!
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Love it, six simple words yet so effective 🥺😢😩
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Thank you so much!
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Thank you to teach something new. And yeah post was awewome 👌👌
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Thank you!
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Love this as an idea. Will be doing so many so these now!
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They are soooo fun to do you’ll really enjoy writing them!
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Was it something I said? Didn’t say?
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Maybe both?!
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It would appear that some more soul searching is in order.
Amazing how her six words can say so much.
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Thank you!
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Wow
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Thanks!
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Wow, very powerful six word story. Loved it. Thanks for sharing PoojaG
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Thank you so much!
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You’re welcome PoojaG.
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Absolutely mesmerized by this small yet effective mini story!!
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Thank you so much!
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Wow, I thought to myself, “you can not tell a story in 6 words.” I am flabbergasted.
Well done!
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Thank you so much!
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SPOILER: this is my attempt at constructive criticism. Don’t cut me down like a confused zombie at a Redneck Chainsaw Massacre. Maybe I’ll learn something too.
I suppose that was a story. I’m still curious how you can have a full story without a plot and character development. Perhaps this was more of an IDEA for a story, a starter, the kick out of the gate, which sends the imagination somewhere else?
It’s not QUITE as length as, say the Lord of the Rings, but it has a nice flavor to it. Alright, I’ll give it a thumbs up. Nice job 😉
P.S. I couldn’t write LOTR anyways, so who am I kidding?
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Haha don’t worry constructive criticism is welcome here!
It’s not really a story and I think most people know that but it’s easier for me to call it a ‘six word story’ rather than call it a ‘six word sentence meant to get your imagination going so that you come up with a story about it in your head’.
Glad you enjoyed it!
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Beautiful, small yet deep❤️
Great Writing ✨
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Thank you!
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