The Little Attic Upstairs That No One Visits

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There is a little attic upstairs

That no one visits

The door only gets glares

And in the centre of the attic sits

Photo albums of our old memories

Except none of the good ones are there

It is only the bad memories one sees

One day the little girl could not bare

The curiosity any longer

So she made a plan to sneak in

She did just that and no one saw her

But instantly regretted what she had seen

Now, she finally understood why those memories were hidden away

She decided something had to be done

She put them all together in a pile in dismay

And set them on fire and watched them burn

There is a little attic upstairs

That the little girl visits often

And every time she finds a new photo album of nightmares

She watches it burn till it too is gone


About “The Little Attic Upstairs That No One Visits”:

Apologies for any typos, I burnt my fingers roasting marshmallows with my cousin brother and my sister so it’s a little hard to type right now.

This poem is about trauma. Many of us have little attics we don’t want to visit that contain all our bad memories. Except that the only way to get rid of those memories that haunt us to work through them and “burn” them till they can’t hurt us anymore. The more we hold on to these bad memories the more they control us even if we’re not aware of it.

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103 responses to “The Little Attic Upstairs That No One Visits”

  1. This is so powerful in its truth. May I share this on my page?

    1. Thank you so much. Yes, feel free to share it.

        1. My pleasure 💕

  2. It drew me in. Yes, we all have those little attic’s that we never visit because of what’s there. Yes, we do need to work through those old photo albums, but it isn’t easy. I was looking for the next paragraph. Very good. Sorry about your fingers. I hope they get better soon. Thanks for sharing. Have a great week.

    1. Thank you so much. I agree, we all have those little places in our mind where we hide the bad stuff. It’s okay, my fingers are almost okay now. Have a great week too.

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  4. It is a lovely piece of work
    I think that, no matter how you burn the photos, you can still be tripped up by something crushed into the beams.
    For me, at least, the key becomes learning to disengage from those photos. So you can choose to burn or not burn.
    I really like your metaphor.

    1. Thank you so much. You’re right, some of those memories never fully leave. We just have to learn to process them and do your best to move on.

  5. was it a pandora’s box?
    it sounds like it when she talks
    the attic is dark.
    it bears no mark,
    she wants to forget
    without regret…

    1. Ooh, I love your poem too. It’s a great extension.

  6. I’m sorry your fingers are burnt, though I’d like to be glad you’re roasting marshmallows. I admire your poem for its qualiteis of detail and authenticity. I have boxes of family mementos that I’ve not been meaning to avoid, but they are under other things, and I’m not paying attention to those things on top. Am I prevaricating? Maybe. Good work from you, and easy on the cooking of the ‘mallows.

    1. That’s okay, this was probably the best reason to accidentally burn myself lol.
      Thanks so much. Yes, sometimes we avoid those memories either metaphorically or literally. We put it off because we don’t want to deal with it.
      Thankfully I’m out of marshmallows for now so I should be fine haha.

  7. no, sometimes wish I had. I remember seaching through my father in laws net shed…..found a lot of history…he was a commercial fisherman as was his dad, and there was a lot of history left behind…really regret not spending more time in there

    1. I guess not having those memories is tough too. Sometimes we want to know to know more about our family history.

  8. What a thought-provoking poem! I enjoyed it.

    1. Thank you so much, so glad you enjoyed it!

    1. Thank you so much.

  9. I think we all have an attic up there with things hidden away. It’s just the size of the attic that differs. Great work, Pooja. Very good portrayal of that feeling we probably all have from time to time.

    1. Yeah, I think so too. Thanks so much. Glad it was relatable although I wish we didn’t all have some sort of trauma.

      1. Ideally, yes, none of us would have that cross to bear. But it’s those scars that sometimes show off our greatest strengths and show that we survived.

        1. True, often they make us even stronger.

  10. Wow, an amazing story. I am concerned with the bit about starting a fire in the attic…

    1. Thanks so much. Lol, don’t worry she was careful.

  11. Creepy, and yet awesome!

    1. Thank you so much!

  12. Great poem, and how ironic you burnt your finger doing something fun though… Things to think about love that❤️

    1. Thank you so much! Lol yeah, it was the best way to burn my fingers though I have no regrets 😅

  13. NICE POST 💚💓💖

    Blessed and Happy day 🌄

    Greetings 👋🇪🇸

    1. Thanks so much 😊

    1. Thanks so much.

  14. I don’t have an attic but I have piles of hidden bad memories from the past. They still haunt me. I guess everyone has. Your poem was good.

    1. Yes, I think most of us have those bad memories from the past. Thanks so much.

  15. Glad she burnt all those bad memories!! But in reality they are probably best talked through and processed.

    1. Very true, the best way I would say is to work through it with a therapist!

  16. Completely agree. I had a small instance where about 20 years ago I had invited a group of people over to my new condo so they could help me paint and I said I’d buy them all pizza. I was talking to the driver (they came over in a big van) and he said he didn’t want any. Well, I misheard/misunderstood and thought he meant EVERYONE didn’t want pizza. So I didn’t buy them any. And when they were wrapping up and asked where the pizza was, I was sooooo embarrassed. And they had to leave and couldn’t wait. I went over that memory so many times over the years until about 3 years ago. I tracked down each person and apologized. It was silly, but the memory hasn’t bothered me since I took that action.

    1. Thanks so much. Wow, that sounds like an awkward situation but obviously an accident on your end. I’m glad you were able to call them and get closure. It really does help to do that.

  17. A very well written poem Pooja! You’ve drawn a good analogy between old photos and memories.

    1. Thanks so much, so glad you enjoyed it!

      1. You’re always welcome 💞

  18. toys in the attic

    1. Amongst other things…

      1. and the bigning of cocoa puffs!

  19. Loved the poem PooG!

    So finally you’ve started jeopardizing yourself in 2024.

    Is it you are clumsy, sleepy or badass? What is it?

    1. Thanks so much!

      I think I’m just clumsy and have a habit of doing stupid things 😅

  20. Beautiful lines and true words, Pooja!! I really like this poetry😊🥰🤗🤗🤗💯

    1. Thanks so much, so glad you enjoyed the poem! 😊

  21. brave little girl… and your poem so well written and beautifully expressed…
    a really great share, Pooja 🤍

    1. Thanks so much, really appreciate that 😊

      1. always a pleasure 🤍

  22. I’m sorry about your fingers, Pooja. I think many have an attic full of poignant unwanted memories. Sadly, some can be instilled in the mind and we are unable to rid ourselves of them.

    1. It’s fine, they are healing quickly. I agree, we all have those memories and unfortunately some are there to stay. However, we can try working on them as much as possible and try to process everything in a more healthy way.

      1. I agree with your comment, Pooja, and I’m glad your fingers are better,

        1. Thanks so much.

          1. You’re welcome, Pooja.

  23. What a delicious way to injure yourself! Sorry it’s left you temporarily incapacitated; hope they heal soon!

    1. Right?? It’s probably the best way to accidentally burn yourself and the sugar makes you forget about the pain lol. It’s healing pretty fast so I should be fine by tomorrow!

  24. I loved reading this poem Pooja, so much emotion. It is wonderful that you acknowledge trauma, and this is a great path towards healing oneself. I also have an attic that I visit regularly. If I don’t visit and acknowledge it, it ends up manifesting with other symptoms such as anxiety. Keep up your great work 🙂

    1. Thank you so much. I feel that way too, we have to keep cleaning out the attic or those memories keep growing and causing us issues in our lives.

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    Hope your fingers heal well.

    1. Thanks so much, I appreciate it.

  26. A very clever commentary on an issue most can relate to.

    1. Thank you so much.

  27. interesting. but if she burned the albums in the attic. Why didn’t she burn the house down?

    1. She put out the fire as soon as the albums were burnt 🔥

      1. It’s good to be careful, but 1 slip and it’s arson 🤣😎🙃

        1. Hehe true 😅

  28. Captivating and poignant !! <3

    1. Thank you so much! ☺️

  29. Interesting poem.

    Glad to hear your fingers are healing quickly.

    I don’t have an attic but rather a dark, dank, musty crumbling cellar obscured with thick cobwebs. 🙂

    1. Thanks so much.

      I think that counts too haha. I guess we all have these little places we don’t visit often.

  30. Interesting poem! Yes, attics can be such creepy places!

    1. Thanks so much and yes they can be!

  31. Intriguing poem!

    1. Thank you!

  32. Excellent thought, everybody had bad memories thàt haunt still, and the happiest thing now is that your fingers are OK

    1. I very much agree. And yes, they’re almost healed now, thanks.

      1. You are welcome

  33. Oh no not burning your hand roasting marshmallows. I hope your okay. That little attic can be a freaky dark place. Great post

    1. My fingers are mostly okay now and it wasn’t too bad of a way to burn them lol. Thanks so much.

  34. Good analogy 👍.

    1. Thanks so much 😊

  35. Love this!
    Though I’m mostly afraid of my own attic, I hope to one day get the courage to make it up there to be able to just burn these photos and finally release them.
    I’m sorry about your fingers, marshmallows can be worth it though! Hope you enjoyed them 🙂

    1. Thanks so much!
      I truly hope you can. It can be very freeing.
      Yes, the marshmallows were so good it was worth it! 😊

  36. Nice very powerful

    1. Thanks so much.

  37. I loved your post. Our attic only held good memories, mostly because only holiday decorations and other stuff rarely used was stored there. Now those things are all stored on a main floor storage room as we continue purging our hoard. Nothing in the attic. Well, I haven’t looked lately….

    1. Thanks so much. I think all our attics need cleaning from time to time just like the other rooms and our mind.

  38. “Apologies for any typos, I burnt my fingers roasting marshmallows with my cousin brother and my sister so it’s a little hard to type right now.” Don’t know if this was supposed to make me laugh, but it’s safe to say it did. I love when authors manage to make poems where you really have to scour between the lines, well done!

    1. Thanks so much, so glad to hear that!

  39. That’s an interesting analogy, I like it.

    1. Thank you so much.

  40. 🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻

  41. so relatable! I think you’ve captured what it is like to have traumatic memories, and live with them, bravo! xo

    1. Thank you so much!

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