The Way You Make Me Feel

You feel smooth

And soft

Against my skin

I still remember

The taste of you

In my mouth

Every time I see you

My heart beats a little faster

As you seduce me

My mouth waters with anticipation

I take a deep breath

You smell so good

I can’t resist any longer

And I just can’t wait anymore

I want you now

Why are you taking so long to cook?

I’ve been craving peas all week

And as I think all this

I realize they’re cooked

And I’m going to have a great meal

There’s a very good explanation as to why I am writing a poem about peas (no I didn’t finally lose my mind as everyone expected). To understand this story you need to know that I love peas so much I could probably live on nothing but peas but with that same passion I hate carrots. My friend who shall remain nameless (her) hates peas and loves carrots so when we got into an argument about which vegetable is obviously superior to the other (yes we have nothing better to do than fight about vegetables, and peas are obviously the best vegetable) she told me “if you like them so much maybe you should write a poem about them” and I told her “fine challenge accepted.” So here is the poem and now I am challenging her to write one about carrots unless of course she is ready to admit defeat…

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17 responses to “The Way You Make Me Feel”

  1. […] The Way You Make Me Feel […]

  2. Well played, I must say. This is just the beginning, I advise you to accept defeat, here’s a little bombshell for now 😉

  3. Reblogged this on MistryLand and commented:
    How the carrot pea war started…

  4. The one time I cannot relate to your poem 😀 BTW It’s smoothness and softness (and smell and taste) is what makes peas so… eew

    1. Hell yh! Burn peas! Burn! Thanks Meera 😊

      1. How dare you two gang up like this?!?!

    2. How very dare you?! You come here on my blog and then you insult the greatest vegetable of all time? They will be avenged!

  5. Your love of peas may not compare to my love of Brussel sprouts!

    1. Really?? I’ve actually never had Brussel sprouts!! 🙂

      1. They’re the best! Check it out!

        1. Yeah I actually bought some a few days ago and I’ll definitely try out the recipe! 🙂

  6. Lol I hate peas as much as I love carrots! Can’t take your side on this one! 😀

    1. Lol why does everyone keep saying that?!? Carrots just taste so bad to me I don’t even know why 😂

      1. Hehe we feel the same about peas

        1. That is just preposterous! Peas are amazing! Hehe just kidding 😂😂

          1. Hahahahahaha “amazing” is an overkill. Peas are horrible. I should write a piece on how horrible peas are! #Thinking

            1. Hahah noooo you’ll hurt the peas feelings! 😂😝

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