Six Word Story #197

I Was Poisoned By My Neighbours

Six Word Story:

Past permanently perished. Present permanently pitiful.

About The Six Word Story:

I had a weird night yesterday. I swear this story will tie into todays six word story. Anyway, I went to sleep okay and then I woke up in the middle of the night, threw up and went back to sleep. I think I know what happened though. As you guys know, I generally eat oil free but I had a cheat day and ate some oily foods which I think my body sort of rejected lol. I had some pakoda for the South Asian people that read my blog, you guys know how irresistible those are.

So what does that have to do with todays SWS? Well, because of the interruptions in my sleep last night, i.e me vomiting my guts out, I decided to take a nap today. But I didn’t wake up refreshed, I woke up groggy and noticed I had no post for today. And so this six word story was born. I always tend to write darker stuff when I’m sleepy or haven’t slept well and that’s why this story ended up kind of depressing. But I ended up sort of liking it after all.

Did you have a good nights sleep yesterday? Do you enjoy naps or do you wake up feeling like crap and regret everything? Let me know in the comments below because I would love to hear from you and don’t forget to leave your own six word story. Or simply stop by and say hi!

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135 responses to “Six Word Story #197”

  1. Clever use of words

    1. Thank you so much.

  2. Stomach problems do give us nightmares.
    That weren’t meant to be my six words but it’s the truth.

    1. Yup, very true. I always get weird dreams when I’m feeling ill.

      1. 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

  3. That’s a good reflection, that you write darker things when you’re tired. I noticed this about myself, too. I’m downright cranky if I haven’t slept enough. 😅 I think that’s part of the reason alcoholics are always throwing temper tantrums; well, part of the reason. They’re always tired but they also destroyed their brain chemistry. One-two punch.

    Anyway I hope you sleep well tonight and your body doesn’t explosively reject anything. 😊

    1. Hmm that makes sense, it probably sucks more for alcoholics since they’re both sleep deprived and sobering up.

      Thanks and luckily my body didn’t explosively reject anything (so far) 😅

  4. Life is permanently slipping away daily!

    1. Yes, so true!

  5. Future forever foreboding, eternity endlessly empty.

    1. Loved that 👏

      1. Why thank you 😊

  6. I usually adore naps and mostly wake up well. However, sometimes, especially after eating rich or oily foods, I still feel groggy and kind of yucky. I hate that! This morning, I couldn’t wake up! I finally got off my couch around 10:30 and only because Child #3 made me! I took a short nap, but did not wake feeling refreshed. Here it is, 8:34 and I am so very tired. What is wrong with me?!!!

    1. We all have days like that when we just feel exhausted all day. Even naps don’t help. Hopefully you’ll feel better tomorrow ☺

  7. Lots of insights we can make out in that ultra short story Pooja. A new story format💖😊

    1. Thank you so much, glad you enjoyed this format ☺💕

  8. The past has perished and the present is pitiable. OMG, what’s left then…only the uncertain future.
    Pakodas have taken too heavy a toll! Might be you ate pakodas quite late at night. Usually, this happens when we consume such hard-digesting food before sleep.
    This SWS says it all. Lack of sleep makes the things worse and only then you can come up with such type of stories.
    Alliteration in the story is admirable, and sounds good to ears unlike the theme of the story.

    1. I didn’t eat them too late since I don’t eat past 9pm but I think I just ate oily food all of a sudden and my body wasn’t prepared for it lol.
      Thank you and yeah lack of sleep certainly does that.

      1. So this cheat day didn’t allow you to cheat the usual diet pattern. You had to bear the brunt.

        1. Yup, the cheat day had too heavy a price this time.

  9. Sorry to hear you were feeling poorly, I hope that you feel yourself soon!

    1. Thanks so much!

  10. We adore reading your blog! Your unique perspective and real voice have an impact in the world. Keep creating, because your ideas have a lasting impact. Thank you for being who you are!

    Thanks – TheDogGod

    1. Thank you so much!

  11. Oil fuels cars better than bodies.

    1. Now this is the truth!

    2. Lol, that’s the truth right there.

  12. I’m in shark week so I feel exhausted and angry and just a week before I had extreme pain in my gut.🫥 I literally understand this post and currently am tired and in PAIN.😭

    1. Oof that’s awful, it’s probably anxiety because that causes gut issues sometimes. Hope you feel better soon and good luck 🍀

  13. Hi pooja ❤️ You’re really good at creating these interesting six word stories! Though, I’m sorry to hear you were throwing up and not feeling well 🙁 are you feeling better?

    1. Thank you so much 😊 Yes, I was fine after I threw up and have been okay so far.

  14. oh no that would be pitiful to wake up and throw up. I hope your feeling better now!!1 🙏🏼💗

    1. Thanks and yeah I was perfectly fine once I threw up lol 😅

      1. Thank goodness!!! 👍🏾

  15. Take care buddy

    1. Thanks and you too.

  16. Take care, Pooja!!

    1. Thank you!

  17. I hope you feel better now 😊 I know my stomach also reacts to oily food, especially if I change the oil I use for cooking.

    1. I’m okay now, thank you. Yes, oil can really mess up your stomach sometimes.

  18. Ah,I’m sorry to hear that. Hope you feel better soon. <3

    1. Thank you and I’m much better now.

      1. That’s great to hear. Take care of yourself.💓

        1. Thank you 😊

  19. Sorry to hear you were sick. I understand the lure of greasy food, lol. I am a shift worker. I find my transition from nights to days disrupts my sleep and my creativity. I have a natural tendency towards being a night owl. Hope you are feeling better and rested now.

    1. Thanks so much. Yeah, disruption in sleep really messes with creativity. I’m more of a night owl too and prefer to write at night.

  20. I hope you feel better soon. Sweet dreams!

    1. Thanks so much, I’m okay now!

  21. Oh dear, waking up in the middle of the night especially to throw up isn’t pretty.. I hope you get better soon. And a nap by definition should be as short as possible, the longer the groggier.

    1. Thanks, I’m okay now. Yeah, I usually try to sleep for only half an hour but I think I oversleep sometimes.

  22. the bridge in between crumbles slowly 😉

    Feel better soon, Pooja🤍🤗

    1. Love that six word story and thanks so much 🤗💕

      1. most welcome 🤍🤗

  23. Cheeky, but very creative use of words… I don’t sleep much as it is, so I hate having my meagre 4 hours interrupted.. hope you feel better .💙

    1. Thank you so much. Same here, I sleep only for a few hours so I hate it when those aren’t good.

  24. Loved this post – heress my feedback –

    Thanks for reading , Love The Blog !!
    Thanks – TheDogGod –

    1. Thank you so much!

  25. Future a magic realm of possibility.

    1. Yes, the future is full of possibilities.

  26. “perfect words in a nut shell…”

    1. Love your six word addition.

  27. A good nights sleep really can make or break the day. Sorry to hear you were unwell. I like the story too 🙂

    1. Agreed, my day is always awful when my sleep is bad. Thanks and I’m okay now. How are you feeling? Have you recovered?

      1. Struggling with sleep certainly does affect your day. That’s good to hear and I have not yet recovered but doing everything I can …

        1. Oh sorry to hear that and yeah keep fighting. Hopefully you’ll be okay soon.

  28. I like the use of all P-words; makes a more dramatic statement. Hopefully today is better for you. Me? I awoke way too early which means I’ll doze off in front of tonight’s movie, lol.

    1. Thanks so much. I’m all better and I’m like that too lol, when I don’t get enough sleep I end up dozing off randomly.

  29. Time tortures tirelessly; sleeping schedule–sane.

    1. Oh wow, love that.

      1. Thank you!

        1. You’re very welcome!

  30. i sleep alot

    1. Me too, I’m not one to stay awake when I could sleep instead.

      1. to quote john do not wake nor shake me ty

      2. omg another history major. people ask do you want to teach. i said hell no.

        1. Lol same, I didn’t study history to teach it and that’s what I always tell people.

  31. Pitiful present Personal, Perhaps prescribe puns. 🤣😎🙃

    1. Haha love that 😅

  32. If I don’t get a good night’s sleep, my writing suffers and I feel I have to redo it after I feel more rested,

    1. I’m the same way, I can never write properly when I’m sleepy and I tend to end up rambling.

  33. 2 nights ago I slept terribly. I was up for like 2 hours in the middle of the night, anxiety, you know. I hope you are feeling better today. I know since I am eating less sugar when I overload on sugar I usually get a headache the next day. Take it is easy!

    1. Yes, anxiety keeps me up sometimes too. It really sucks because lack of sleep makes me more anxious and it can turn into a cycle. Thanks!

  34. Hope you are feeling better!

    I can’t eat even a trace of oil without having a violent reaction featuring throwing up and feeling dreadful among other indignities …

    1. I’m okay now, thank you!

      Yeah, oil makes me sick too which is why I try to avoid it. Not as bad as your situation since I can still eat a little but if I eat too much I get very sick.

  35. I’m sorry that made you feel so ill. I just went through something similar. I’m doing the anti-inflammation diet, and I broke it to have some hot chocolate. That gave me my first ever migraine and I felt awful for a couple of days

    1. Oh wow, that’s awful. I had migraines a lot as a teen and they can really suck. Hope you’re okay now.

      1. I’m definitely better, thanks. But that was just weird that hot chocolate did that to me!

        1. Yeah, it’s surprising to have such a strong reaction to hot chocolate but now you know what to avoid.

          1. Unfortunately, yes. I’m not happy about it though

            1. Of course, hot chocolate is such a comfort drink. It must suck not to be able to drink it.

              1. I’m still not entirely sure about it though. It happened so fast and I am a bit disoriented by it

                1. Yeah, that’s quite a reaction so it may be caused by something else too.

                  1. Possibly, I do have some theories

  36. Same thing happened with me last night, Pooja.
    I slept close to 10 pm. Then my sleep got disturb upto 2 am. I couldn’t sleep after that. It was horrible!
    Though, I didn’t vomit, but I’m not making proper food choices, currently.
    I should work on this.

    1. That’s awful, I hate it when you can’t go back to sleep. I guess it’s something we both need to work on more.

  37. It’s good that you know what you did to cause the problem and you can sleep better tonight. I had nightmares as a kid if I ate late.

    1. Yeah, I think eating late can often effect your sleep and overall health.

  38. Sorry you had a rough night! Stay well. 🤗

    1. Thanks so much 🤗

      1. You’re welcome! 🙏🏼💕

  39. Thanks for sharing these words. Anita

    1. My pleasure, thanks for stoping by.

  40. Tired of trying. Time to do.

    1. Love that SWS, so uplifting.

  41. Naps are meant to make you feel energized but I wake up grumpy and all the more tired!
    And hope you are feeling much better now!

    1. Lol same! I’m better now, thank you 😊

  42. I really like your SWS. The past creates the present.

    “Rewind. Redo. Relive. Reap. Rich. Reward.”

    1. Thanks and love yours too.

  43. Our bodies do that sometimes. When we stay away from something for a while then revisit it, it rejects it. Good poem!

    1. Yeah, I think that was the exact issue. Thanks!

  44. I always regret naps but I sure do love taking them!

    1. Lol, same here!

  45. Sorry to hear that. I have experienced similar things before. If I eat oily food, my stomach won’t be able to take it. So I am very careful to eat as oil free as possible, although I can never be entirely oil free. LOL. I recently find that adding a bit of sweetener can help cut down on oil and salt. I mean just a little bit. Not too much. Or sometimes I use Sushi Vinegar while cooking since it adds vinegar, salt, and sugar and some other flavors, which help cut down on oil… Wish you have a speedy recovery.

    1. That’s a good idea, I think sushi vinegar has a lot of flavour so you won’t need much oil after that. Thanks, I’m pretty much okay now.

  46. There is something strange about napping in the afternoon. I always wake up as a different person, can’t explain the feeling adequately. That’s why I avoid sleeping in the afternoon, especially after lunch!

    1. I know, it’s so odd. I always try to nap in the mornings too but I never have the time 😞

  47. The Heart pumps
    Love through You

    1. Love that six word story.

  48. Sorry about your night experience.

    Yes I had a good sleep at night.
    I enjoy naps, my only issue is that I sometimes find it had to fall asleep at night after having one.

    1. Yes, sometimes napping disrupts regular sleep. Glad you had a good nights sleep.

      1. Thank you.

        1. You’re very welcome.

  49. Oh noooo not permanently pitiful 🤣🤣🤣

    1. I may have been a tad bit dramatic with this one 😅

  50. Great post!

    1. Thank you!

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