The Day I Met Death

The day I met death was so ordinary, I could never have guessed the turn it would take. I was just a young girl doing something silly with her friends. At least that’s how it started. A girlfriend of mine insisted that we all go to the new psychic she had found. She swore that this psychic was never wrong when she read her future. So, off we all went to the psychics store.

Everything was going smoothly and we giggled as the cards showed promise of lovers, fortune and fame. Until she read my tarot and put down the card everyone dreads. We all gasped in horror, our smiles quickly fading. The psychic even seemed concerned and quickly ushered us out of her store. Locking the door as soon as we left.

The Day I Met Death

We parted ways and I walked home. That’s when I first got a glimpse of him. Death, Grim Reaper, La Muerte, Psychopomp. Call him whatever you like, but there’s only one like him and he has but one job. So, I quickly ran into my house and locked the door behind me. I knew that wouldn’t stop him for very long but it would give me enough time to execute my plan.

You see, my grandmother had been a gypsy and told me all kinds of stories about the spirit world. One of them had always fascinated me. It was a story about a man that lived to be two hundred because he was able to capture death and make a deal with him. The method was simple, pour a circle of salt all around death and he wouldn’t be able to move past that circle.

I ran to the kitchen, grabbed a bag of salt and quickly poured it onto the floor. Then, I sat in the living room and waited. In the moonlit room, I saw a shadow approach me. I sat there, completely still till he was close enough for me to capture. Stuck in the circle, the Grim Reaper yelled and shouted. Quickly, I used my grandmothers iron chains to lock him in place, knowing that the touch of death was now powerless thanks to the salt.

The Day I Met Death

Eventually, we struck a deal and went our own way. Many years later, as my children and grandchildren surrounded me on my hundredth birthday, I saw death once more. This time, I didn’t fight him or try to stop him. Instead, we walked side by side as he took me to my next destination.


About “The Day I Met Death”:

This short story was a response to Kevin’s NTT post for the week. I love his NTT prompt images. Do check out his blog for more.

This story was more of a fun write than anything else. I know it has lots of plot holes but I don’t care. I just wanted to sharpen the old writing knife (pen?) because I haven’t felt inspired to write a short story in quite a while. But when I saw these two images, I knew they would work well together to create an interesting story.

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120 responses to “The Day I Met Death”

  1. Brilliant story so well done so compact and concise and yet it has everything.

    1. Thanks so much, really glad you liked it.

  2. Very good, Pooja. I like this a lot!

    1. Thanks so much!

  3. okay, now I get it….that title was a little ominous…now you’ve got me thinking of my near death experiences..one was getting lost on a hike in the Rocky Mountains, and one involved walking across a railway bridge in the dark….maybe I’ll share on my next new post?

    1. Interesting, yes do share that in your next post.

  4. Wow, awesome short story using Kevin’s images as prompts.

    1. Thank you so much.

      1. You’re very welcome.

  5. Good story, Pooja. Loved it when the gypsy ushered out the girls and locked the door.

    1. Thank you so much, glad you enjoyed it.

  6. Great read, Pooja! Reminds me of the old “salt over the shoulder” legend times 10! 👏👏👏

    1. Thank you so much! In our culture, we also say that wiping the floor with salt water stop bad things from coming in.

  7. I really enjoyed reading the story, Pooja!! ❤️😊

    1. Thank you so much! ☺️❤️

      1. 🤙🏻💕💕💕

    1. Thank you! ☺️

  8. Very interesting story idea Pooja and so well narrated

    1. Thank you so much.

      1. My pleasure

  9. It is so interesting. I almost feel the realness. Well done!

    1. Thank you so much!

  10. That is a wonderful story, Pooja. You are a talented writer. 💖📚

    1. Thank you so much ☺️💕

  11. Wow what an intense story. A lot happened in just a few senstences. Very intriguing. It was a great short story and I like Kevin’s picture.

    1. Thank you so much. So glad you enjoyed it and I really liked the pictures too.

  12. I loved the story.

    Good to know that about salt. I will always carry a small packet in my pocket from now on, lol.

    1. Thank you so much, yes always carry some salt around lol.

  13. Imprisoning Death While Living
    Embracing Love Continuing Dying

    SMiLes Dear Pooja This is Wisdom
    i Gained From Your Short Story About

    ‘The Grim Reaper’
    Hehe i was thinking it
    Might Have Been a True
    Story until the 200 Year Old Man

    Entered The Scenes Yet it Surely
    Reminded me of the Deafening Sound

    After my Mother’s Last Breath Only

    New Rooms For Her Love to Carry on
    Within me
    When Love
    Survives
    The Soul
    Continues to Fly

    iNDeeD The Wisdom of Wings..:)

    1. Thank you so much. Haha yes, the 200 year old man gives it away. Although it may just still be a true story 😉😅

      1. Hehe
        Do Live
        To 201 With
        SMiles to Make

        It All Come
        True With

        SMiles…

        Lasting…

        Yes
        A Dead
        Give Away
        Dear Pooja
        Keeps Bones SMiling💀

  14. I have no intention of meeting him in the foreseeable future LOL

    1. Lol I think most of us can agree with that statement.

  15. Thanks, I love this idea and the way you executed it! Happy dusting off of the pen! 😉 This makes me think you might enjoy this short story:

    https://camillawellspaynter.wordpress.com/2024/04/03/psychopomp/

    1. Thank you so much! Will definitely check it out 😊

  16. Love the story. I wonder who unchained the death?

        1. Yeah, it’s linked at the bottom of the post.

      1. she unchained him once they struck a deal.

    1. Thanks, she unchained him once they struck a deal.

  17. ” I know it has lots of plot holes but I don’t care”

    And that is exactly why bloggers still exist. Just a little fun writing to scratch the itch 😀 Glad you got the words out.

    1. Thank you, yup absolutely. I think that’s the beauty of it 😊

  18. Very Enjoyable–BRAVO!! I especially loved the ending–went straight to my heart💖

    1. Thank you so much! So glad you enjoyed it 😊

  19. a hundred seems a good deal 😋
    wonderful as always, Pooja 🤍

    1. Haha I think so 😉 Thank you so much ☺️

      1. pleasure always 🤍

  20. then gudka
    picked up her bass guitar
    and in lemme style
    crooned
    the ace of spades
    seven or eleven
    b aby the ace of spaaades
    hooo ah~

    1. You know it 🎸

      1. gruff. yes

  21. Makes me think of the movie The Seventh Seal by Ingmar Bergman. One of the great cinematic masterpieces that centers on the period of the Black Death in Europe in which a knight travels the countryside, occasionally playing a drawn-out game of chess against death.

    1. Ooh interesting, I haven’t watched that movie but it sounds fantastic.

    1. Thank you!

  22. great story!!

    1. Thank you!

  23. Great story Pooja! 👏🏼👏🏼
    I love anything grim reaper related.

    1. Thank you so much! ☺️ Haha same here.

  24. Pooja, I love how you combined the 2 pictures into one post. They go really well together. Your story is brilliant! I was clutching my pearls through the entire read. lol 🌺🩷😂

    1. Thank you so much, I just felt like the pictures go so well together! 💕

  25. Nice engrossing read, thanks.

    1. Thank you so much.

  26. This is a fun story, Pooja. Even though Death is a character. But she gets to negotiate with Death, and isn’t that a good thing (a fun thing?) we’d all like to do. This reads like a salient Canterbury Tale. Well done!

    1. Thank you so much! Haha yes, I wish we all had the ability to do that but alas the truth is more sobering.

  27. Brilliant story🔥

    1. Thank you so much ☺️

  28. This is a fun story, but the Death Card doesn’t always mean your death. It usually means a drastic change. I’m sure death followed the main character as a lark. No matter what the gypsies say, Death can not be trapped or stopped, unless he wants to be. More likely it was a test, to see if the subject was worthy of extended life. 🤣😎🙃

    1. Absolutely, in reality the Death Card is actually not a bad card at all. It just signifies the end of something and that could also be the end of certain problems. Oh yes, perhaps it was a test all along.

  29. Suspenseful story elements, writer Pooja!

    1. Thank you so much!

      1. Welcome, best to you!

  30. Fantastic..,👏👏👏 I enjoyed this story, Pooja. 🌞

    1. Thank you so much ☺️

      1. You’re welcome PoojaG. 🙏

  31. Wow, Pooja! Great story telling my friend. You had me on the edge of my seat until the end. ❣️

    1. Thank you, so glad you enjoyed it! 😊

      1. You’re most welcome, Pooja!

  32. Awesome Pooja! I loved this! It made me sit up and say, wow! X

    1. Thank you, so happy to hear that!

  33. Genial 💛♥️💖

    1. Thank you ☺️

  34. I hope the next destination was a good one 😊. I’d stay away from those tarot card readers for real 🤣. Good story!

    1. Lol I would never visit a tarot card reader again 😅 Thank you!

  35. This is interesting!

    1. Thanks so much!

  36. Nice and artistic curated story Pooja. A wonderful and sad ending where you couldn’t have the urget to stop death at 100 yrs! Showing eventually we’ll all perish ni matter what. Good work👏

    1. Thank you so much. Yes and I think eventually we know when it’s time so we stop fighting death.

  37. Woow, Terrific 😄

    1. Thank you 😊

  38. That was really good Pooja.

    1. Thanks so much.

  39. Haha, I don’t understand the salt part, but I guess it is some sort of folklore. However love the line “I used my grandmothers iron chains to lock him in place”. Yes, take control of our life and our death. That’s the spirit, Pooja.

    1. Thank you. In a lot of cultures it’s believed that salt keeps bad omens and spirits away. Yes, that’s what this story was about mostly, taking control instead of resigning ourselves to our fate.

  40. Your short stories are so good I need to know the next destination!!!!

    1. Thank you!

      1. You’re welcome!

  41. Excellently written, I love how you merged the story with the images, really a great, and makes us realize how we all will meet death one day 🙏

    1. Thank you so much. So glad you enjoyed it 😊

  42. Thank god this was story!

    Fuck I was scared

    What a beautiful writer you are 🤗

    1. Haha yeah, don’t worry it’s just a story 😊

  43. Wow beautifully written. I loved the tone and the ending. I am impressed.

    1. Thank you so much, so glad you enjoyed it.

  44. I think you did a fantastic job, Pooja! So well written and imaginative! Excellent, and I also loved the ending and how meeting death came full circle. 🩷

    1. Thanks so much! So glad you enjoyed it. Yeah, I think even though we think we want to live forever eventually we’re just ready to move on to the next chapter 💕

  45. Wow, impressive write, Pooja and LOVE the title.. so good💕👏🙏🏼

    1. Thank you!! 🙏😊

  46. This reminds me of the ‘Supernatural’ series😂👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾

    1. Oh nice, I used to love that show😀

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