Love Cuts Like A Knife

Love Cuts Like A Knife

He held her in his arms

Tears running down his face

The love of his life

Taken from him

So soon and so tragically

The blood still dripping

From the slit on her neck

The knife still warm

In his hand


About Love Cuts Like A Knife:

If you’re familiar with my poetry and short stories, you already know I tend to love twists and turns like the one in this poem. I also tend to lean towards darker themes when it comes to my writing. It’s not done on purpose, I swear haha. My mind just like to go there. I blame all the thrillers I’ve read over the years lol.

Anyway, when I was writing this poem and rereading it, I felt like the death was more metaphorical than literal. It’s supposed to show how sometimes we can love someone deeply and dearly. But still cause them the most pain. And we can end up “killing” what we love not because we don’t truly love it but because of our own personal issues. That was my take on the poem.

What did you think of Love Cuts Like A Knife? Were you surprised by the twist at the end of the poem? Do you think love sometimes causes a lot more hurt and pain than happiness? Let me know in the comments below because I would absolutely love to hear from you or simply stop by and say hi!

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61 responses to “Love Cuts Like A Knife”

  1. That’s very sad…

  2. Yikes That’s kind of gruesome…if you’re going for gruesome, you’ve achieved it.

    1. Yeah gruesome or disturbing I guess (it was written on Friday the 13th)

  3. Psycho killer, qu’est-ce que c’est?
    Fa, fa, fa, fa, fa, fa, fa, far better
    Run, run, run, run, run, run, run away

    1. Lol one my fav songs for a reason!

      1. Because you aren’t a serial killer, right? 😄 😐. Right? … 😐 🙁. 😐

        1. Ummmm… yes…?

          1. Sooo, you’re Vader, and I’m Padme? Lol

            1. Yes that is extremely accurate 😂

              1. Kenya ain’t quite that lava planet from episode 3, and Tatooine was shot in Tunisia… But this is fine. 😅🤷

                1. Close enough lol 😂

  4. This is such a moving piece, Pooja . . .

    “The blood still dripping

    From the slit on her neck

    The knife still warm

    In his hand”

    Nicely done.

    1. Thank you so much. Really appreciate the compliment ☺

      1. You’re most welcome.

    2. I thought I would say ohh how lovely this poem is by reading the title. But this poem is actually deadly. You killed it pooja, not just with an outstanding poem. But, also the character.

      1. Haha thanks so much- appreciate that.

    3. Hey, sorry this went as a reply to you. I was commenting to the post and didn’t realise that I’m posting it as a reply. Sadly, there’s no undo button.
      Best wishes to you

      1. No worries. WordPress can be a little wonky at times.

  5. Creeeeeepy! I love it!

    1. Thank you!

  6. This must be so brutal for someone, very dramatic! Great poem Pooja!

    1. Thanks lol!

  7. oh errie.. I’m running from this one.. 😂😂

    1. Lol it was written on Friday the 13th 😂😜

      1. I’m a little slow and dense! 💖😂

        1. Not at all it was being an idoit and posting it on the 14th after writing it on the 13th 😂😂😂

  8. I am sorry my friend, but as well written as it was, I don’t like the theme.

    1. Thanks and that’s totally okay. No need to ever apologize for that. It is a darker horror theme that’s not for everyone.

  9. Creepy! I like it! Very descriptive!

    1. Thank you so much!

  10. That’s soo 😭

    1. 😭😭

  11. Spooky! Yikes!!!

    Nicely done! For a split second, I heard my heart beat loudly in my head😂

    1. Haha thank you! 😊😂

  12. So deep, love cut like a knife. Hmmm. Nice piece

    1. Thank you 😊

  13. What a surprise ending. You reminded me of a piece of news: a week ago, a South Carolina man had a heart attack and died when he was burying the body of his girlfriend he had just strangled.

    1. Oh wow that’s so scary. I always forget crazy things like that happen in real life too.

  14. Dark… 😱
    Former Goth that I am, I like it. 💗

    1. Thank you! So glad you like it 😊

  15. So saddd yuuphhhh
    Psychotic

    1. Yup I was going for psychotic for sure.

  16. oh wait a minute now!!! Why does he have the knife????

    1. Hmmm… I wonder 😜

  17. What did she do?!?

    1. Hmmm you tell me lol!

      1. I don’t know but he must have been an awful cad! lol

        1. Lol he sure was!

  18. So not love. We just celebrated 35 years of bliss yesterday. To even think along these lines is insane.

    1. Wow congratulations on such a wonderful anniversary.

      1. Thanks, Pooja! I wrote somewhat on my blog, should anyone be interested in how we did it despite disability and eventual austerity.

        1. I’ll definitely be checking it out.

  19. Soo deeep❤️

    1. Thank you 😊

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