The Count At Midnight

The Count At Midnight

The Count was a lonely man. For decades he had lived alone, a recluse in his castle. There were stories about him in the town, rumours that bored housewives had created to explain his peculiarities. Some were so farfetched even he had to laugh, others were so close to the truth it concerned him. Still, he remained in his manor only leaving at night.

The only thing the townspeople knew about him was how much he enjoyed hunting. The bizarre thing was that he only hunted at midnight. He claimed that it was because it was more thrilling. If only they knew how truthful that answer was. Somehow, people always went missing after his midnight hunt but the townsfolk never really took notice. Or put two and two together. The people that went missing were always lowlifes. Drunks, thieves, men who did not know how to treat a lady. The kind of people that no one missed.

As he walked down the street one night, so silently that even the stray cats didn’t bother running away, he heard a dreadful scream. It was a lady and she was screaming for someone to help her. In no more than a second he appeared right next to her. The men surrounding her with bottles of booze in their hands stepped back in surprise.

“Get out of here if you know what’s good for you,” one of the men warned him.

“I believe you are the ones that should leave, if you know what’s good for you,” he responded in a calm voice.

The men began to approach him but he remained perfectly still. Almost in anticipation. Then he suddenly turned and told the cowering lady behind him to close her eyes. She stared at him in surprise.

“Just do it,” he told her, more forcefully. She nodded and closed her eyes. He couldn’t help but admire her beauty. Her lips were red like blood, her skin was silky and smooth and her curly hair fell over her shoulders perfectly. But this was not the right time to admire her, he remembered.

In a matter of seconds, the men lay on the floor screaming in pain. And he knelt over their bodies, his fangs in their necks. One after the other he drained them and quickly disposed of their bodies. Once he was done, his attention was again on the beautiful woman crouching on the floor with her eyes tightly shut and her hands over her ears. He could tell that she was shaking a little.

“Are you okay?” he asked her. But she didn’t hear him on account of her hands being over her ears. He knelt down beside her and touched her wrist lightly, hoping to get her attention. She gasped at how cold his hands were. She looked around in confusion.

“I… I know what you are,” she whispered.

“What am I?” he asked, quietly.

“You don’t come out during the day, you’re faster than any human, you never age, your skin is cold to the touch…”

“What am I, my dear?” he asked once more.

“You… you’re one of the night creatures.”

“We prefer vampires,” he chuckled.

“You don’t seem particularly scared of me,” he observed.

“Why would I be? You just saved my life,” she explained.

“Yes, but this is the part where most women run away screaming,” he told her.

“I’m not most women and I have had enough experiences to know that humans are the real monsters,” she said with a deep sadness in her eyes.

“How did you end up in this situation, a beautiful lady like you in an alley like this doesn’t seem correct,” he asked.

“My father lost a bet and that meant those men won me,” she whispered. Tears began to fall from her eyes.

“You’re safe now and if you’ll let me I’ll take care of you” he promised her.

They stared into each other’s eyes and as she blinked she found herself on a soft bed in his mansion. For the next few weeks they spent every waking moment together. Except when he had to go on his “hunting” trips. That was about once a week and even though it only took a few hours, she missed him dearly. Her bed felt empty without him holding her in his arms. Eventually, she plucked up the courage to ask him what she had wanted to from the day they met.

“I want you turn me,” she told him.

“What?” he asked surprised.

“Please, make me one of you,” she begged.

“I couldn’t do that to you, you deserve a normal life. You don’t deserve to be damned like me,” he told her.

“I was damned long before I met you, I’ve lived in hell my whole life,” she explained.

Eventually she was able to convince him. Although reluctantly, he agreed. Deep down, he knew he could not live without her and humans have such pathetically short lives. He couldn’t lose her in just a few decades.

He began to kiss her neck. She flinched as the kisses turned into little bites. Her body began to twitch as the transformation began. She stayed with her all night till it was complete. She opened her eyes and smiled at him. He was standing by her side as she lay on the bed. She got up and he held her tight. As the candles burned in the background and the clock struck midnight she realised she was hungry. In fact, she was starving. All she could think of was the burning in her throat.

“You need to feed,” the Count observed.

She nodded and off they went. Two vigilantes in the night, keeping one another company for all eternity.

The Count At Midnight


About “The Count At Midnight”:

This image is once more from Kevin’s NTT post. Shoutout to him for always creating cool images and starting this awesome challenge. Do check out his blog!

This story is inspired by Twilight. The best awful vampire book to exist. At least in my opinion. I find the part in the movie where Bella tells Edward she knows he’s a vampire really funny and stupid so I wanted to add that to the story lol.

Anyway, I hope you guys enjoyed “The Count At Midnight”. It’s just a silly little story but it was so much fun to write. A bit different from my usual. No major shocking twists in this one.

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65 responses to “The Count At Midnight”

  1. What a horror. You better stay awake at night from now on Pooja.

    1. Haha yes, perhaps so.

  2. Really, really great tale, Pooja! I like the little “vigilante” nod and how they prey on the lowlifes. Kind of unintentional crime fighters. Certainly wiser than going after a noble, of course lol
    Love it! And just in time! I am getting this week’s post together as we speak.

    1. Thank you so much! And thanks for the cool image, this is one of my favourites.

      Can’t wait to read everyone else’s posts too!

      1. Lots of entries this week and all very cool and unique!

        1. Yay, that’s great. I’m excited to read them. I saw one that used the same image and had a similar theme which was so cool! We both saw the same thing in the image.

          1. Yes there were similarities in a few entries, but some different spins as well, which is great.
            Tomorrow’s new images are going to be epic. Most I’ve ever posted in one shot lol

            1. I just read them and they were all great, really enjoyed them.
              Oh yay, excited to see them tomorrow!

              1. Yes, a lot of great stuff this week. Every week, really. 👍👍
                Tomorrow is going to be an extravaganza! lol

                1. Woohoo, I’m excited to see the images and come up with some more stuff!

  3. I love this.

    1. Thanks so much.

  4. I enjoyed this Pooja..You gave The Count some depth and feeling.. I love vampires and in the virtual, this is what I am…sometimes:)

    1. Thank you so much, I really like vampires too and totally got those vibes from the image.

    1. Thanks so much 😊

  5. Oh I loved it PooG!

    You are exceptional.❤️‍🔥

    🦹🏻‍♀️🦹🏻‍♀️

    1. Thanks so much, so glad you enjoyed it! 😊

  6. Hey Pooja. So good! I’m doing ok. Taken a little much needed break from blogging 🙂

    1. Thanks so much! Hope you’re enjoying your break from blogging, it’s important to take some time off sometimes 🙂

  7. “The Count At Midnight” was a very entertaining story. Deep, reflective and fun at the same time. It was very well written. I certainly enjoyed reading it.

    1. Thanks so much, I’m so glad you enjoyed the story. It was very fun to write.

  8. Great story. I could sense that the writer was having fun writing it too. I was really waiting for the twist though.

    1. Thanks so much, yeah it was a fun one. Sometimes, the twist is that there is not twist…

  9. pretty cool story ! you should try doing some more fantasy style writing , you seem really good at it.

    1. Thanks so much, I want to try more since this is a new style for me but was a lot of fun to write.

  10. Engrossing, thanks.

    1. Thanks so much.

  11. Absolutely wonderful story! I was enthralled I always enjoy a great romance… even vampires need a partner!

    1. Thank you! So glad you enjoyed it, haha yes everyone needs someone to love 😅

  12. You’ve written it so well Pooja. Very interesting story

    1. Thanks so much, really glad you found it interesting.

      1. You’re very welcome ☺️

  13. he had an itch
    she smiled and twitch
    in her tight dress her dark skin
    she knew he was slain
    laid bare
    hearts and passion care
    across the water
    to make love
    to the elephant mocker s daugther!

    1. Lol, love it!

      1. the art of seduction

      2. wood press has made more subtle adjustments. oh oh.

        1. Aka a million new glitches…

          1. too bad my computer guy cant fix them too

  14. I like your scene better to the twilight scene lol… anything vampire/Edward related is great
    in my opinion….and yours is simply grand..
    wonderfully weaved , Pooja ✨

    1. Lol thank you, I love vampire related stuff too and find Twilight so amusing 😅💕

      1. most welcome 🤍✨

  15. I cant wait till the movie come out:)

    1. Aw haha thanks ☺️

    1. Thank you!

  16. Whoa! What a spooky and haunting story, Pooja. Brilliantly written my friend and novel-worthy. Btw, I contacted WP support about my blog not showing current posts in the reader. We’ll see what happens.🤞

    1. Thanks so much 😊

      Oh good, hopefully it’ll be fixed. Let me know if you need screenshots of what it looks like when I search your site and what comes up or rather doesn’t. I can email them to you.

      1. Pooja, that would be great if you could email them to me. My email address is calgal@runbox.com. Thank you!!

        1. Sure, sending them now. No problem at all!

          1. Thank you so much, Pooja! 💕

            1. No worries 😊

  17. What a wonderful story! I was glued to the page until I finished! You are a very good writer Pooja, keep it up.

    1. Thank you so much, so happy you enjoyed the story!

  18. Oh, Pooja. It looks like Kevin’s art inspired your story. Devilishly delicious.

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    Interesting!

  20. Quite an intriguing story, Pooja! 😄 The Twilight reference makes it cooler, I remember reading it in 8th grade. Edward and Bella are somewhat bland, but your protagonists are not!

    1. Thanks so much! Same here, I read Twilight as a teenager and loved it. As an adult it’s cringey but still fun. Thanks, I tried to give my characters a little more depth and character.

  21. What an interesting story.
    I just reminded me of the lengths we can go when we find the person who loves and understands us.😀

    1. Thanks so much. Yes, very true. When we find the right one we do a lot for them.

  22. Interesting story. I wonder what’s next in their adventures.

    1. Thanks so much, hopefully they got their happily ever after.

  23. I have to say this was a great story! And I did love the twilight books, and movies, too!

    1. Thanks so much and same here!

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