I sit beside you
As you run your fingers through my hair
I slowly bite my lip
And tilt my head back
Closing my eyes
Smile on my face
You must be my Heaven
Or my personal Hell
Only one way to tell
Usually someone gets murdered at some point of my poems so this one was a little out of the blue for me. But that’s what my brain came up with today. It’s all the Lana Del Rey I’ve been listening to. I promise never to write anything this cheesy again. Enjoy, I guess?
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45 thoughts on “Ecstasy Of The Heart”
Awww, I love cheese! 😉
Haha we all need a little cheese in our life! 😜
Now we’re talking!!
This is really a nice one.. loved it
Thanks so much.
Nice that no one had to die in the poem. I prefer less death and stuff. Was a good poem!
Thanks! Maybe I’ll do poems like this once in a while too.
This was great. By the way, I like cheese 😁😁
Thanks haha 😜😊
A well written poem!
Love it. It was smooth.
A great chance of tone
*change 😅, see we need edit option
We honestly really do!
Thank you so much.
Tbh, i was expecting a murder story when I clicked on this post. But I have nothing to complain about, this is so beautiful!
Haha yeah my stories do tend to be like that but thought I would try something new. Just as shocking I hope! 😂
That was beautiful!
You should write these kind of pieces more often. 😊
Thanks so much! 😊
I don’t think it’s cheesy! I think it’s awesome! Don’t censor yourself.
Aww thanks so much!
Some cheesiness now and then is okay. Don’t limit your writing. It’s imagery was vivid. Thanks for sharing and have a nice day!
Thanks so much and have a nice day too!
Love the ending. Often love cannot fit in the rigid social and personal structure of life.
Thank you and yes I absolutely agree.
A very good loving poem.
Thanks so much.
You’re very welcome!
Oh I liked it.. you know me; I don’t like anything without cheese or if it’s too scary! 💕😂😅
Well this is perfect then 😂
Love the ending!
It’s straight. I liked the way you delivered this poem. 👌✨
Thank you very much. ☺
Nice post 😄
Thank you 😊
My pleasure 😄
Have a fantastic day!!
Thanks and you too 😄
Cheese is always a good idea❤
Aww thanks 💕
What’s life without a little cheese now & again…love it.
Haha thank you.