Ecstasy Of The Heart

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I sit beside you

As you run your fingers through my hair

I slowly bite my lip

And tilt my head back

Closing my eyes

Smile on my face

You must be my Heaven

Or my personal Hell

Either way

Only one way to tell


About Ecstasy Of The Heart:

Huh, for the second time in my life I may be at a loss of words. Usually someone gets murdered at some point of my poems so this one was a little out of the blue for me. But that’s what my brain came up with today. I rarely write poetry that doesn’t end with a double homicide or something lol. It’s all the Lana Del Rey I’ve been listening to. I promise never to write anything this cheesy again. So my brain is maybe in a weird place and so I came up with a poem I probably would not have otherwise. Enjoy, I guess?

Oh and the poem is about that raw primal urge most of us have. It’s where we let go of the right and wrong of things and let our bodies take over. There are some people that bring that out in us.

What did you think of Ecstasy Of The Heart? Were you surprised to see a more romantic poem on the blog? Were you expecting a twist that never came lol? Let me know in the comments section below. Or simply stop by and say hi!

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45 responses to “Ecstasy Of The Heart”

  1. Awww, I love cheese! 😉

    1. Haha we all need a little cheese in our life! 😜

      1. Now we’re talking!!

  2. This is really a nice one.. loved it

    1. Thanks so much.

  3. Nice that no one had to die in the poem. I prefer less death and stuff. Was a good poem!

    1. Thanks! Maybe I’ll do poems like this once in a while too.

  4. This was great. By the way, I like cheese 😁😁

    1. Thanks haha 😜😊

  5. A well written poem!
    Love it. It was smooth.
    A great chance of tone

    1. *change 😅, see we need edit option

      1. We honestly really do!

    2. Thank you so much.

  6. Tbh, i was expecting a murder story when I clicked on this post. But I have nothing to complain about, this is so beautiful!

    1. Haha yeah my stories do tend to be like that but thought I would try something new. Just as shocking I hope! 😂

  7. That was beautiful!
    You should write these kind of pieces more often. 😊

    1. Thanks so much! 😊

  8. Love it!!!!!!

    1. Thank you!

  9. I don’t think it’s cheesy! I think it’s awesome! Don’t censor yourself.

    1. Aww thanks so much!

  10. Some cheesiness now and then is okay. Don’t limit your writing. It’s imagery was vivid. Thanks for sharing and have a nice day!

    1. Thanks so much and have a nice day too!

  11. Love the ending. Often love cannot fit in the rigid social and personal structure of life.

    1. Thank you and yes I absolutely agree.

  12. A very good loving poem.

    1. Thanks so much.

      1. You’re very welcome!

  13. Oh I liked it.. you know me; I don’t like anything without cheese or if it’s too scary! 💕😂😅

    1. Well this is perfect then 😂

    1. Thank you!

  14. It’s straight. I liked the way you delivered this poem. 👌✨

    1. Thank you very much. ☺

  15. Nice post 😄

    1. Thank you 😊

      1. My pleasure 😄
        Have a fantastic day!!
        Butterfly 🦋

        1. Thanks and you too 😄

  16. Cheese is always a good idea❤

    1. Aww thanks 💕

  17. What’s life without a little cheese now & again…love it.

    1. Haha thank you.

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