Dead Youth- A Poem

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Trigger Warning: “Dead Youth” is one of the darker poems on this blog. It contains imagery that some may find disturbing. If you are a sensitive person, you may want to avoid this poem.  



Ripped apart


Every inch of skin

Peeled off

Till only bones remain

WIth each cut

I lose a little more of myself

Until I am but a fragment

Of who I once was

No longer whole

Barely human

Haunted by the ghost

Of the person I was

And the ghost

Of the person I wanted to be

But never became

“Dead Youth” is a pretty cool title, huh? I wish I could say I came up with it myself but the truth is I used a title generator and it came up with something similar which inspired this title. So, I guess I can say I partially came up with the title.

What is this poem about? (asked no one except myself) Well, it’s about how time breaks us. How when we are young we are so hopeful that things will get better. But as we get older our optimism wavers. Eventually, reality hits us and we realise that somethings just suck and that will never change. It is what it is.

As I mentioned, this is one of my more darker poems. And has a lot more imagery that I usually use. We have all the cough syrup I’m on to thank for that. Let me know what you thought of this poem in the comments below. Or simply stop by and say hi.

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110 responses to “Dead Youth- A Poem”

  1. I didn’t read it…

    1. That’s fair, it’s not for everyone 🤷🏻‍♀️

  2. Many of us have been in that dark place. Never an easy place to be.

    1. Yeah very true.

  3. Beautiful. Even the tags are all like extra lines in the poem. I like reading about your context and meanings at the end, maybe it would be nice for more poems to come with a disclaimer about what kind of syrup the writer’s been drinking or not.

    1. Thank you so much. Haha well I think that may take away some of the wonder lol.

  4. Cough syrup hmm, note to self – get some. Loved the poem Pooja, it is dark but we are light and dark and ignoring the dark can be an unbalanced take of the world.

    1. Haha would 10/10 recommend cough syrup for writers. Thank you and yes I agree. The dark comes along with the light. We can’t just be light and happy all the time.

  5. I really feel this. It’s pure emotion. 💚

    1. Thank you so much 💖

  6. And some find comfort in the darkness, like I did.

    1. Yes, some do.

  7. I read your description, Pooja. This poem has multiple interpretations, as poems sometimes do. Some, much darker than your description. I thought of people who cut themselves, from the line, “With each cut.” Sadly, as a teacher I had students dealing with that. 😢

    1. How as a teacher you help them?
      Because kids really need great support.

      1. Be aware. Be observant. Involve the school counselor, and psychologist, if the school has one, and parent conferences, of course.

        1. That’s great and helpful

    2. That’s deep🥲, how were you able to deal with such situations?

      1. Teachers and other school staff deal with many difficult situations. One day at a time, is the short answer. 🙏🏻

    3. Thanks so much. That’s actually what I was talking about. I used to self-harm as a teenager. I’m sorry some of your students do that too but it’s good they have a teacher like you that cares.

      1. You are welcome, Pooja. It is not easy to write about difficult (personal) topics. Sharing those stories takes courage and vulnerability. Doing so can help others and bring healing to the writer. I applaud you for your willingness to bring a challenging experience to your audience. 💗

        1. Thank you so much 💖

      2. Follow-up comment- I left the HS classroom in 2019. I now work with adults online. Fortunately, there are many dedicated and caring teachers out there. 💗

        1. I see and I’m glad they’re still in good hands.

  8. Are you ok, sweetie? The poem is very descriptive; I can feel your pain. I’m just worried about you, but since I’m not there to give you a hug, I’ll send a virtual one. 🤗. Hope that helped!

    1. This is definitely much darker than your usual posts. The imagery is provocative and your explanation doesn’t dissuade one from thinking you’re going through and have been through some very difficult times to have had this come out, even if it was induced by cough syrup!

      I stay away from pretty much all cold remedies because they trigger depression and even suicidal thoughts, even when I wasn’t feeling that or thinking about it before taking the remedies. When I was younger I got sick with a lot of colds, so this medication induced depression was a real struggle. Once I stopped taking it I was amazed how my anxieties and depression went way, way down to the point where I was able to manage it through other therapies I chose.

      Blessings to you!

      1. Thank you so much. Most medications in general make me feel a little more depressed than usual. When I feel something darker I tend to just express myself instead of expressing it. But I also try not to hold on to the negativity.

        1. That’s a great approach! Just being aware that we’re having the feelings is important to being able to deal with them. I know it sounds simple to say that, but too often we just get caught up in the depression and struggle to observe it as having a physical cause, and then know we can ride it out.

          Before I was aware of the triggers and the causes of my depression episodes, I would get sucked down into that vortex, be fully connected with the depression and struggle to get ti feeling positive because I was believing all the negative thoughts that were coming up.

          Once I became aware that there were triggers and physical causes, I was able to keep my head above water and work on telling myself that once the medication passed out of my system, or when I dealt with the trigger (such as getting more sleep) I would feel better. Being able to ride it out and keep positive with myself made an enormous difference in handling those episodes.

          I’m glad you have a way of dealing with this to be able to get through it.

          1. Thanks so much and yes I so agree. Being aware of our feelings and where they’re coming from makes a huge difference When you know exactly what the causes are you can actually deal with them and not let them get to you.

    2. I am, thank you so much 🤗

  9. It’s dark, still wondering if it’s syrup or something else. Anyway get better

    1. Mostly just the syrup and some life experiences.

  10. I don’t know what to say.
    Because, I know this is based on real life events.
    Take care dear friend. Be well.
    I hope you are in a much comfortable position now. 😀

    1. Thanks so much and yeah I am. 😊

  11. Its deep!
    I am not fit enough to fully understand it😅
    All i know is, i don’t like dark, so, wishing you light, too.

    1. Thank you so much 💕

    1. Thank you so much.

  12. We change a lot as we grow older. The innocence gives way to something that’s darker, forged by the harshness of our reality. Beautifully written, Pooja. I hope you’re recovering well

    1. Yes, that’s absolutely it. Thank you so much.

      1. You’re most welcome ☺️

  13. Very good. Especially the double haunting at the end. I wasn’t expecting that.

    1. Thank you so much.

  14. I took this poem differently. as I used to be a cutter and that is how I felt at times. Amazing poem

    1. I used yo be a cutter too and that part about cutting is about my experiences with that.

  15. I really like your poem Pooja and I’m not a fan of dark as you know but there is a realness here in the struggle that many wrestle with. I have read it over and over.. these last lines…

    “And the ghost

    Of the person I wanted to be

    But never became”

    Can you say more of what you meant.. I really love them.

    1. Thank you so much! I guess we all have a certain idea of what we want to be when we grow up but reality is different and as adults our lives are sometimes less exciting than we imagined.

      1. oh yes Pooja, that is so true!

  16. Beautiful and bold Pooja🤗

    1. Thank you so much 🤗

  17. This poem makes me think of pain being so deep that one just wants to cut it away, down to the bone and start fresh and new in new skin, and with a new spirit that’s happy and not in that darkness within ourselves. If we could cut away the layers of hurt, rejection, heartache and pain, that’s exactly where it would go, right to the bone, and even to the heart, mind, body, and soul. Thank you for sharing. Have a great weekend.

    1. Wow, that’s an interesting interpretation. Have a great weekend too.

  18. It’s a good poem, for it speaks the truth.
    reading your further description, reminded me of Susan Boyle’s song: I dreamed a dream from Miserables.

    1. Thank you so much. I love that song.

      1. me too 🙂 and who wouldn’t 🙂 it cheered the whole world up., I felt

        1. Yes, I think it did 🙂

  19. Paints a strong image the poem. Enthusiasm becomes harder as people get older definitely. Not least due to physical weaknesses, but also the mental strain of life before that day …

    1. Thank you so much. Yes, I absolutely agree. More than anything it’s mentally exhausting to be an adult.

      1. Too true 🙂

  20. How did you get the title generator?

    Sometimes I find it difficult finding the right titles for my blog post.

    1. I just googled it and used a site that came up.

  21. Beautiful piece, by the way.

    I don’t know if it’s only me that is rather interested anytime I see “warning” 😂

    Weird I guess😭🤦🏻‍♀️

    1. Thanks and I’m like that too lol 😂

  22.     It’s a mystery to me how symbolic things become more potent than reality. A child’s anxiety is soothed by a teddy bear even though it is an inanimate object and not a person or animal. There is a natural anxiety about starvation that motivates the seeking of food, but after enough food has been eaten, the next morsel like the straw that broke the camel’s back is symbolic in the way it can relieve anxiety about unrelated subjects. Food fights a threat to survival and so becomes generalized as a tool for defense. It then in symbolism becomes a tool to fight any threat including a loss of self-esteem. And it is seen in language. Fighting and hunting involve sword fighting, knives etc. But in language we use expressions like “cutting remarks” and “cutting criticism.”
        It’s a mystery how it is that most things are symbolic and not the reality that is sought. Like the teddy bear, the moon is an inanimate object and not a person or spirit. For the teddy bear, one could say that there was a ‘creator’ of the object and perhaps also for the moon. What’s desired is the connection to the ‘persons’ connected to the symbols. The symbols like thoughts and fantasies have mistakenly become more real than the actual reality — … I guess, I don’t know… it’s all very puzzling.
        OK then, I will not give you cutting remarks; so I’ll give you the moon and a plush bear, although I’m not the creator of either. I’m getting lost — maybe I should write a poem…

    1. Maybe you should write a poem about the topic…
      Yes, anxiety is an interesting thing. Both necessary and unnecessary at the same time.

  23. I never use trigger warnings. Life should be experienced, not avoided. Even the darkest of places in one’s life/spirit/soul/mind/existence should be available to all. What does not kill us makes us stronger. Trigger warnings contribute to the weakening of the species. We must know the dark places, so that we can recognise and appreciate the light.

    1. That’s one way to think about it. Personally, I know some things can be triggering for me and I would prefer to avoid the trauma so I want to be respectful to others who feel the same.

      1. To each one’s own. 😎

        1. Yup totally 😊

  24. As a child we desire adulthood for the independence it offers, as an adult, we desire the childhood for the carefree attitude it allowed.
    How weird rights? It comes full circle.

    1. That’s so true. I guess the grass is always greener on the other side.

  25. We’re still becoming…

    1. Yes, we are.

  26. You definitely have explained how I felt during my teenage years! Thanks for sharing the poem. Reminded of not so great memories but I’m on a healing journey right now.

    1. Thanks so much! Yes, it’s how I felt as a teenager too.

  27. I love this poem. A lot of times it’s good to face the dark in order to see the light and expressing ourselves through words can help. It’s like a freeing feeling. Keep sharing. 🙂 Sending positive vibes your way too my friend! 💕

    1. Thanks and I absolutely agree. It’s much better than repressing it. 💕

  28. Well-written, evocative, and honest. Nicely done, Pooja.

    (I guess today must be a good day for poetry; I wrote my first haiku today, as well.)

    1. Thank you so much. And that’s great.

      1. You’re welcome!

        I wrote a total of four haikus today. I rarely ever “do” poetry, but today was my day for it. Yours, too, it seems!

        1. Oh wow, that’s great. It’s really been a good couple of days for poetry.

          1. Wow, it feels like a day of poetry, which is about life and death anyway.

            1. And love…and loss.

              1. True. And hope… and despair.

            2. It really does, some days poetry just comes to you.

  29. Like I said, you are a master or is it mistress at dark poetry. But Pooja, your youth isn’t dead, it’s still alive and kicking 😊!

    1. Thanks so much! 😊

  30. Sending some love your way. This poem seems to speak of pain and depression. I hope you’re doing okay. Write me at if you need to share, discuss, bounce some thoughts off of. I’m here. Hugs, C

    1. Thanks so much, that’s really sweet of you but I’m actually much better now.

  31. It sounds like you’re getting better.
    I liked the poem, it’s kind of like something I wrote a few months ago. So yeah, I like these kinds of writings

    1. Thank you so much. Did you share yours on your blog? I would love to read it.

      1. I’ve been thinking of sharing it, but I’m a bit hesitant, because it’s not the kind of poem you’d see on a blog.
        But maybe I should, though

        1. I understand, it’s different than what you generally share. If you’re up to it you can definitely share it but don’t feel pressured to.

  32. Beautiful poem and very touching! Losing and finding yourself is a never ending road.

    1. Thank you so much!

  33. Loved the poem. The vivid imagery adds to it.

    1. Thank you so much.

  34. Now, looking back at the time when I was young, I realized that it was my narcissistic environment that was forcing me to form unrealistic goals to torture myself. If I knew then what I know now, I would have practiced more self love and self affection, to set up reachable goals, to work on happiness for myself, to pay more attention to people who really loved and had regards for me, to avoid those who only claimed that they had regards for me. Well, hindsight is 20/20. So…

    1. Yes, it’s never too late to learn. I feel the same way. There is so much advice I would have given my teenage self if I could. I think my environment made everything worse too.

  35. This is just, wow
    You captured emotions no one would imagine

    1. Thank you so much.

  36. Very emotional 💔💚

    1. Thank you so much 😊

  37. I love it! It is dark but I love it!

    1. Thank you so much!

  38. […] but it could be a good fit. I was a bit hesitant to share this at first, but was geared on by a post shared by Pooja G. Like that post, if you didn’t read this, totally […]

  39. I loved it! My kind of poetry

    1. Thank you, happy to hear that!

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