My Very First Hideaway

My Very First Hideaway, Fairytale cottage surrounded by mushrooms

Fairies and goblins

And fairytale cottages

The hideaway of a child

Whose only escape

Was located in her mind

Away from the anger and shouting

Locked in her room

Books became

Her closest friends


About This Poem:

“My Very First Hideaway” is a response to this weeks Moonwashed Weekly Prompt. I saw that image and I just had to write something about it. It really took me back to my childhood when I would spend the entire day reading fairytales and children’s books. Mostly by Enid Blyton.

This poem is inspired by something I’ve been thinking about a lot recently. Adults often see kids as background characters. We don’t realise how much they hear and understand. And how much of an impact the decisions of adults have on them.

Recently, I was talking to Sheri Dye from ReadBetwixtWords in the comments of one of my posts. And what she said summed up exactly what I have been thinking but was never able to put together so perfectly. She said ‘Kids are resilient.. but they’re not unbreakable.’ And that’s exactly it. Kids make it through the worst imaginable situations and experiences and come out alive. But not unharmed. Those scars last a lifetime.

As kids, we don’t have many escapes from reality. And for many of us, books/reading/writing became our escape. For many, that’s how they got into reading and writing.

So tell me, what was your hideaway as a child? Was it reading? Are you a fan of Enid Blyton’s books? Let me know in the comments section located below. Or simply stop by and say hi!

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117 responses to “My Very First Hideaway”

  1. Very good Poem 👍✅

    1. Thanks so much 😊

  2. I love the poem and the sweet photo, Pooja. Sadly, children endure that shouting and worse. So very sad. 😭

    1. Thanks so much. True, children often have to endure much more than we realise 😔

  3. Poignant and delightful at the same time.

    1. Thank you so much.

  4. It’s a beautifully reflective poem that captures the solace and escape that books and imagination can provide in a child’s world. I appreciate the sentiment you shared about how kids absorb more than we often realize and how they find ways to cope and heal. But, of course the scars remain there for a long time to come.
    As for me, reading and playing were my hideaways as a child.
    Thanks for sharing your memories!

    1. Thank you so much. Yes, imagination and books can really save children. My pleasure!

  5. Beautiful lines, Pooja😊👌👌👌👌

    1. Thank you so much 😊

  6. Aww I relate so much with your poem, beautiful imagery! Neverland has always been my escape, second star to the right and straight on ’til morning!

    1. Thanks so much. It’s the same for me, I always escape into my mind!

  7. I’m more into books now. When I was a kid I had actual forests to go into. I never met a goblin, but I did meet some turkeys.

    1. Wow, that’s so interesting. Turkeys seems scary.

      1. More tasty than scary.

  8. I did escape into books a lot when I was a kid, and weather permitting, us neighborhood kids would go into the woods, building forts, exploring and riding our bikes on the trails.

    1. That sounds lovely, I did that with the kids in my neighbourhood too. It was so fun.

  9. You could have written this poem for me.

    1. Sorry you experienced that too. It’s tough but at least we found an escape.

      1. The happy childhood does exist but not for all. It’s good that we speak up, it brings awareness as it should. It was a taboo for way too long.

        1. Yes, unfortunately it exists for some and not for others. True, when we openly talk about it we help bring awareness and maybe even help some people.

  10. We all had our hideaways when small and only a select chosen group could join us there. LOL,

    1. Haha, true.

  11. I used to read a looot of comics growing up. I guess that was my hideaway, come to think of it.Anyway nice poetry!!

    1. Interesting, I guess we all have our little hideaways. Thanks!

  12. Lovely poetry PoojaG. Enid Blytons Famous Five is still on my Kindle. Hard copies I still have at home.
    And you’re right, children are resilient but not unbreakable. It’s a tough, thankless job raising a child sometimes. But it’s bi excuse to be abusive.
    Reading and writing has always been my hideaway. ,💙👏

    1. Thanks so much. I loved Famous Five. I have so many of her books and still read them occasionally. I totally agree, it’s an excuse to be neglectful as a parent.

  13. Oh lovely poem

    Just by seeing the pic, I understood that it’s based on prompt.

    I wasn’t into much reading when I was a child, but I used to watch a lot of stuff based on magical world, etc.
    Good ol days.

    With time, I don’t like such stuff much. Like that’s now childish, but I’m sure a good content will take me back to it. 🙂

    I still believe in magic 🪄

    1. Thanks so much. Haha yes, it’s not like my usual images.

      Good ol’ days indeed. Magic is magical 😉

      1. This is why I don’t follow many people.
        Following you is equivalent to following 6 people 😛
        This poem was lovely 👏🏻

        1. I have the unstable personality of a dozen people 😅

          1. Well in your words you can say that

            How are you feeling??

            1. I’m fine now, thanks.

  14. Great poem! I used to lovee Enid Blyton, reminds me of my childhood when I spent many afternoons roaming the enchanted world of the Magic faraway Tree😍

    1. Enid Blyton’s books were such a big part of so many peoples childhood. The Magic Faraway Tree books were some of my favourites 😊

  15. Loved this post and the poem! So right…kids are resilient but tough experiences still leave a mark on their emotional lives.

    1. Thanks so much! I absolutely agree. That’s why so many kids are in therapy now.

  16. Beautiful

    1. Thanks so much

  17. Enid was my entry point into a million other worlds and lives too! You can’t beat a good book.

    1. Very true, nothing beats a good book and her were fantastic.

  18. I think that I have read as many of Enid Blyton’s books that were available in my time. And later the ones my kids were reading. Loved her books. Though nowadays, she too has been a part of cancel culture🥲

    1. Yeah, I heard about that and was saddened to hear that. My parents loved her books too and read them to me and later I read many of them myself. She was a big part of many peoples childhood.

      1. Mine too, as she was of my kids.

  19. I’ve never read Enid Blyton😞
    But I didn’t really have books while growing up. I had three books I read and reread. for years. My escape was walking, adventuring to all sorts of places. I had friends but I often did this alone. My parents were far from perfect but I don’t think the arguing broke me, thankfully. I had such an imagination to retreat to. Later on when I got my first set of Narnia books, I found I’d imagined my own narnia before, just a different setting. So I wrote it down. It wasn’t good but I loved the short stories I used to write in my picfare school books. My aunt burned all of them 😔 she wanted me to become a doctor.

    1. Wow, that’s really interesting. Your imagination can be a valuable tool too. Sorry about your aunt burning your writing. That’s really sad but many adults like to force kids to have a different career than what the kids would like to have for themselves 😔

      1. Well I did find my way back to writing in the end. Oh, I loved your poem btw🪻

        1. Can’t keep a writer away from their writing. Thanks so much 😊

  20. Love your poem, Pooja 🤍
    best escape… 🤗

    1. Thanks so much and I agree 🤗

  21. gupta dream
    indian surreal
    punjab in the kenyan jungle~

    1. What was once the jungle except now most of the trees have been cut and the animals are almost gone…

      1. get well. heaven knows i sure do feel like shit too. been reading too much crap here. i took out the x and cleaned things up a bit. lmao

        1. Lol, sometimes you just need to detox.

  22. I love the poem and the photo!
    As a child I “escaped” with music, books, and IMAGINATION!
    I shared one of my favorite childhood stories with my husband recently and he said it reminded him of “The Little Mermaid.” (Of course not the movie, but the actual fairytale book, which I read as a kid).
    I didn’t remember the story, but it must have been in my subconscious. I had a keychain with all old keys on it that I collected from keys I found in my grandfather’s garage. I used to swim in the pool and go underwater and imagine I was a mermaid and had these keys to a secret underwater world. I was probably 10 or 11 and I had very long hair. In my mind, I was a mermaid.

    1. Of course, imagination is the best escape!

      Wow, how interesting. It’s so nice to remember the creative things our mind would come up with when we’re kids. Yeah, to your young self you were a mermaid because you imagined you were.

    2. You could change your name to Marymaid, 🙂

  23. yes i did a lot of reading too growing up, which I did enjoy. But thinking back on it, it was also my way of escaping from reality. Theres no denying kids are paying attention [and can be smart at times], and as a result of tough times the scars do last a long time.

    1. Yeah, for many reading becomes sort of an escape from the real world. Kids are definitely so much smarter than we realise.

  24. Aww, I love this poem, Pooja. Children are resilient but the unhappy memories are not easily forgotten. When I was a child I loved to climb trees. There was a very large tree in our backyard that was my hideway. Thanks so much for joining in. 💖

    1. It was a wonderful prompt and I enjoyed using it to create the poem.
      True, the unhappy memories often scar us and stay with us as adults too. We need to be careful what we say and do around kids.
      Wow, that sounds like a great hideaway.

  25. I think I read Enid Blyton as a kid but I can’t remember any stories at the moment. I read a lot as a kid, and it was a great escape. I considered buying a fairy door for my garden when I grew up.

    1. That’s lovely. She’s such a popular children’s writer and shaped many of us.
      I always wanted to live in one of those fairytale cottages and wear shiny dresses lol.

      1. I’ve seen actual cottages like that as rentals but I can’t remember where they were at the moment.

        1. Yeah, I’ve also seen people live in such cottages. It’s popular on social media.

  26. I escaped into many many books as a child, Enid Blyton being my absolute favourite. I have also read Enid Blyton books to my son.

    1. Enid Blyton was my favourite too. My parents read me her books and later I read them myself too when I could read. She holds a special place in many of our hearts.

  27. Writing was my first escape then reading followed. I also had a very overly active imagination so I used to sit with myself and conjure up my own little universes. I still do it from time to time when I feel like the world and my problems are trying to consume me.

    1. Interesting, mine was the other way around. Same here, I still do that as well and it’s still a nice escape from our problems for a little bit.

  28. Hi Pooja, I haven’t read Enid Blyton. I had other authors at hand when I was young. I enjoyed writing and remember writing a lot of poetry besides what I was supposed to write at school. I don’t think I was good at it but I loved writing, it gave me the freedom of self-expression

    1. Yeah, writing is a wonderful thing for many of us. I loved writing too and I’m sure I wasn’t that good but still had fun.

      1. This is what matters, right?

        1. Absolutely.

  29. I love your poem and the pic.

    I don’t remember reading a lot until I hit high school.

    My favorite escape was to the forest near our house.

    At a very early age, one of the most important lessons I learned in those woods is that you need more than a cape to fly from the high branch of a tree. God looks out for small children, idiots and drunks, so I was glad I had two of three covered that day, lol.

    1. Thanks so much. Lol, glad you didn’t get seriously hurt and learnt a valuable lesson haha.

  30. Yeah kids are way wittier than we think.

    1. Absolutely, they are.

  31. This poem is soooo good

    1. Thanks so much.

  32. My hideaway was my imaginary world. It worked for me for a long time. I just realized it doesn’t work for me anymore

    1. I still use my imagination to hide. It’s tough not living in the real world all the time.

      1. Is it easy to go to imaginary world now? For me, it’s quite difficult now.

        1. Yes, it’s quite easy for me for now but I’m trying to stop. I need to live in the real world no matter how painful it can be.

          1. Let’s swap places. I want it to work for me. It gives break from all the pain

            1. If I could I would. Sending you a virtual hug.

  33. Lovely. Feel better, girl!

    1. Thanks so much!

  34. Hope you feel better soon. Sorry to see you’re sick on the new post.

    1. Thanks so much, I’m okay now.

  35. I love this poem and can absolutely relate. For me it was the “Redwall” series by Brian Jacques, among all sorts of other fantasy books. They were my safe space too!

    1. Thank you and I’m sorry you experienced this too. But yeah, books are a safe space for many. And our imagination of course.

  36. Samuel Marchand Avatar
    Samuel Marchand

    This is such a great post! And so true. My hideaways as a child were reading (especially fairy tales and nature/travel books) gardening, and being in nature. My step dad always took my hiking from a young age while my mom and taught me to read early as well as to cook and, along with my step dad, to garden. I remember always I had very intence and complex emotions and thoughts on things I saw, read and experienced, well before I could articulate them clearly. I remember having an intence emotional reaction to the love theme from Tchaikovsky’s Romeo & Juliet, Fantacy overture. Didn’t know the name or anything but the music just seemed so beautiful but so sad/ tragic also. It gave me chills and still does!

    1. Thanks! Wow, that’s amazing. Great art, whether writing or music, can evoke such strong emotions in us.

  37. This poem is really good!

    I was definitely a kid who read a lot as a child. Some of it was escapism and some of it was just an innate preference for being in my own head. I like what you wrote about people seeing kids as background characters, and I’ve thought of this a lot. It’s pretty important as a parent to transition your worldview toward being a supporting character rather than the main one.

    1. Thanks so much!

      I very much agree, I think as parents it’s important to change once you have kids. If you continue to put yourself first all the time your kids will definitely suffer.

  38. I read a lot as a child and teen. I loved fantasy and mystery books a lot as well as some biographies. Writing and drawing were also a great escape. I would climb a lot, too. I used to climb onto the roof of my garage and bring my ragdoll with me. I would sing and draw and write with her up there haha 😂

    1. Aw haha, that sound fun actually 😅

  39. Great poem by the way 🙂 beautiful and I could relate

    1. Thanks so much 😃

      1. You’re welcome 🤗

  40. Great poem.

    My childhood hideaway was reading, it was my way of learning something different or just not being in spaces I didn’t like.

    1. Thanks so much. Same here.

  41. When I was eight, my aunt gave me a book of fairy tales for Christmas. I wore it out! My younger brother and sister and I read those fairy tales over and over!

    I love that the cottage in the photo represents a world of imagination, an escape from reality for you, Pooja! Beautifully written poem! <3

    1. I used to love fairy tales so much when I was younger too. And yes, it’s a beautiful image chosen by the creator of the prompt. Thanks so much! 😊

  42. Great poem. Beautiful picture.

    1. Thanks so much.

  43. Me? I would always go outside in our slum neighborhood and wander about aimlessly. The shouting was always too loud for me to stay inside.

    1. Yeah, the shouting was too loud for me too which is why I needed hideaways.

  44. Excellent story within your verses!

    1. Thanks so much!

  45. Very good Pooja. I like it. Isn’t it interesting how a picture can spark our imagination?

    1. Thanks so much. It’s so interesting because that’s happened to me multiple times. I’ll see something and it’ll inspire me to write.

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