Slipping Through My Fingers

Slipping Through My Fingers

Slipping through my fingers

Every year, day, minute, second

Time passing by faster and faster

Life slips away with every breath I take

I look at the mirror

Noticing every fine line and wrinkle

Rubbing in a million lotions and serums

Hoping to turn back time

But the orb before me reminds me 

To take a breath

And just live

Focus on the colours instead of 

The black and white in my hair 


About “Slipping Through My Fingers”:

This poem was inspired by Kevin’s No Theme Thursday prompt for the week. He has so many great images as always this week. You can check out all his prompts for the week here.  

“Slipping Through My Fingers” is a poem about aging and how sometimes we tend to focus on the wrong things. I do that too. Sometimes I focus way too much on the more difficult aspects of aging, the ones I can do without. But then I remember, aging is such a privilege that not everyone gets and that’s something to be grateful for. There is so much beauty out there in the world, so many colours all around us. We should be experiencing life instead of focusing on the negative. 

This year, I really want to do that. Experience all I can that life has to offer. Not focus on my laugh lines, the ever increasing greys or the frown lines that are slowly becoming permanent. The title was inspired by this song:

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84 responses to “Slipping Through My Fingers”

  1. Gotta love some ABBA! 🙂

    1. Yes, one of my favs!

  2. How I am feeling this morning

    1. Same here 😊

  3. Stephanie (singing gecko) Avatar
    Stephanie (singing gecko)

    This is all so wonderful, Pooja. <3 I love hearing a forgotten song, which is a gift of aging as well, living long enough to forget and be one day caught off guard. Love your poem, too.

    1. Yeah, I hadn’t heard this song in ages but it randomly got stuck in my head and then my tarot reader mentioned it too and I was like woah. Thanks so much 🙂

  4. I really enjoyed the poem; it resonates!
    –Scott

    1. I’m glad it resonated!

  5. That’s real

  6. I decided to look inside and see what’s there, outside world is also exciting sometimes, other times it’s depressing… In equal proportions, but what I have noticed is I pay more attention to outside things that are reflecting my inner mood. It’s like using a mirror to look at the world, if you hide sadness inside you will find a lot of sadness, if you hide love, you will find it too… It’s a very strange thing to be honest…

    1. It really is strange because like with all things honestly needs to be balanced too.

      1. All things considered, as above so below

  7. Great poem and I like the picture.

    1. Thank you so much.

  8. Nice🔥 The story telling is amazing. Keep writing 🙏🏽💕

    1. Thank you do much 😊🙏

  9. It is a profound and beautiful poem (or short story) on aging. You are very far from needing to worry about that but you still captured good insights. The Abba song is sad. I believe it is about Soviet dissidents I believe, but I am not sure. 1981 was a long time ago but it is still relevant.

    1. Thank you so much. I had never thought about the song in that context, I have no idea what inspired it but if it was inspired by Soviet dissidents that adds so many more layers to it. Certainly still relevant, so much of what happened during the Cold War still plays a role in politics.

  10. Nice 🙏🌹

    Aum Shanti

    1. Thanks 🙏🙏

  11. Beautiful my dear Jodka my best wishes and prayers for you 💞🙏🏻✊🏼

    1. Thank you so much 🙏💗

  12. wisely said, Pooja… 🤍

    1. Thank you ☺️

      1. most welcome…🤍

  13. I like the idea of focusing on the positive. From my teens to my late twenties I was always told I looked older, now I am told I look ten years younger. I call it the vampire affect, because of my shift work I stayed out of the sun a lot, lol.

    1. Haha so that’s the secret- stay out of the sun.

  14. Ah Yes Dear Pooja Time is the
    Ocean The River The Stream

    Grasp It Own It And It only
    Escapes From Us Punch It

    And It Only Returns Now

    to Calm Ocean Waters

    As Waves Fall and Rise

    Without Troughs
    There Will Be No Crests

    And Additionally No Waves at All

    Ah Yes Ocean Calm Returns Perhaps a Secret

    To a Real Fountain of Youth is Visible Above Below
    Within Inside Outside and All Around From the Singularity

    of A Black
    Hole at the
    Center of Our
    Milky Way to the

    Calm Peaceful Eye of the
    Hurricane Well Adapted in
    Balance With The Environment
    All Around Clear and Focused as

    LoVE iN Peace
    Will Be a ReaL
    Foundation of
    Greatest Will and Strength

    Eye of the Tiger Eye of the Hurricane
    Peaceful Chi Until Powerful Winds Come Next

    Once Again With Clarity of Focus And Greatest Will

    And
    Strength
    Far Beyond Time
    to Everflow Now for Real

    No Separation From Wave
    Water Ocean Whole All

    iN All Center
    Point Balance

    Reducing The
    Friction of the Day

    to LoVE iN Peace
    Basically Living
    Forever Now Fully For

    Real

    With
    SMiLes

    Yes Easier Said That Done
    A Great Art of Life a Practice of

    A Lifetime
    Improving
    Center Point Balance

    With Never Ending New
    Free Winds FLoWinG NoW..:)

    1. Definitely difficult but we have to just go with it rather than fighting time. Live while we can.

      1. iNDeeD Dear
        Pooja Embrace
        ReaLiTY Now With

        All Our Might Not
        Always Easy Maintaining
        A Peaceful Focused Clear

        Eye Of Our

        Hurricane

        Yet “Wu Wei”
        Winds In Effortless
        Ease Definitely Potential

        In Humanity

        RaiSinG Loving
        Peace Potential

        Even
        More
        With SMiles☺️🙌⛵️

  15. A lovely poem Pooja.

    1. Thank you so much, glad you enjoyed.

      1. You’re most welcome

  16. Beautiful poem thanks for sharing

    1. Thank you so much.

      1. You’re welcome. I would like to read more of your stuff. Maybe you’ll take a chance and read some of mine.

        1. I certainly will check out your blog too. Thanks so much for stopping by mine.

          1. Again you’re welcome. I don’t know many bloggers so I’m trying to connect with other bloggers.

  17. All we have is one moment – a continuous changing moment.

    1. Yes, exactly!

  18. Beautiful poem.

      1. You’re welcome, Pooja.

  19. Brilliant work with such a powerful message! Focusing on life instead of worrying about it…that’s it!

    1. Thank you so much! Yes, living life in the moment instead of focusing too much on the future.

  20. Yep, lines and wrinkles are inevitable. Better to accept them gracefully and be happy about it 😀

    1. Absolutely, they’re a part of life and no one can escape aging no matter how much some try to.

  21. Consider each line, wrinkle, and grey hair a brush stroke from the palette of life. It’s not signs of aging, it’s art!!! 💞💞💞 Lovely poem, Pooja! 💞

    1. Yes, that’s the perfect way to think about it! Thanks so much 😊

  22. Beautiful post, Pooja!. Ageing is inevitable and it’s best to embrace it. If only I could do that! LOL

    1. Thank you! Haha yes it’s easier said than done. I want to embrace aging but I’m also putting on retionol twice a week on my face 😅

  23. “Life is but a day; a fragile dewdrop on its perilous way.” – Keats

    1. So true, thanks for sharing that quote.

  24. Live each day embracing what God brings my way because I do not know how many more days I have

    1. Yes, none of us know how long we have. Life can be so unexpected.

  25. Great piece, ♥️Pooja♥️

    1. Thank you so much 😊

  26. I like to think about the alternative to aging…I’ll take aging please and thank you 😊.

    1. Yup, aging is much better than the alternative 😊

  27. Now I got ABBA stuck in my head. A fun resonant response to the prompt, PoojaG 😊

    1. Haha I did too, gotta love ABBA. Thanks so much 😊

      1. You’re welcome, Pooja

  28. Great poem with an important message, Pooja, and I love the song and ABBA! 💞

    1. Thank you so much! 😊

  29. I used to wonder at my mother’s statement in her retirement that the days had seemed to speed up and now I understand why. Of course, days don’t speed up as we all know but we do slow down as we age, and this provides the illusion as we get less done in the day. 🙂 Yes, I’m a fan of ABBA too.

    1. Yes, I think although they don’t really speed up but time definitely does seem to get faster as we get older. Thanks so much and glad you enjoyed the song 🙂

  30. This is so beautiful Pooja!

    1. Thank you so much!

  31. Beautiful poem! Your blog disappeared from my feed for a bit. Glad to see it in my blog feed again!

    1. Thanks so much! How odd, I’m glad it’s back now though.

      1. WordPress is strange at times.

  32. You’re welcome dear ❤️

  33. I’m not surprised with what I’m about to say. But, this was really beautiful! Pooj! This is one of my all time favorites from you! It sure tugs at the heart in the best kind of way. ❤️😍🌹

  34. Great song but I feel the poem is a little off. Praise the mirror. The wrinkles are a testement to a life well lived. Go outside and greet the world. Laugh right now, because is a gift.

    Boy that intelligent wisdom was a bit out of charactor for me! 🤣😎🙃

  35. Your poem is well-written and meaningful, Pooja.

    1. Thank you so much. Hope you’re doing well.

  36. Wonderful ❤️

    Blessed and Happy saturday 🌷🌺🦋

    1. Thank you so much 😊

  37. Excellent wow❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

    1. Thank you ☺️

      1. Welcome to my family ❤️😍😍

          1. ❤️😍

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