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Six Word Story #73

He tapped her on the shoulder.

I loved the six word stories you guys left last week so today I decided to write this six word story and I was you guys to continue it and leave a six word reply/addition to it! Tell me in the comments what happens next in six words!
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181 responses to “Six Word Story #73”

  1. Lashaunta Shanese Avatar
    Lashaunta Shanese

    She gasped and prepared for death.
    *I tried 😭 I love your six word stories!!

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    1. PoojaG Avatar
      PoojaG

      I love it- that’s such a good one!!

      Reply
  2. winteroseca Avatar
    winteroseca

    She told him to leave her

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    1. PoojaG Avatar
      PoojaG

      Aww so sad but such a good one!

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      1. winteroseca Avatar
        winteroseca

        Well, it could also be her telling her creepy ex she wants nothing to do with him

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        1. PoojaG Avatar
          PoojaG

          I didn’t think of it like that- it totally could be! This is what I love about six word stories- we all interpret it differently. So fun!

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          1. winteroseca Avatar
            winteroseca

            Yes! Indeed! Guess my self-defense training and my own past kicked in there

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            1. PoojaG Avatar
              PoojaG

              Yeah I guess so!

              Reply
  3. Sandy Avatar
    Sandy

    Let’s run away and get married.

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    1. PoojaG Avatar
      PoojaG

      Aww I love the positive direction you took with it!

      Reply
  4. ninin Avatar
    ninin

    She averted her gaze on him.

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    1. PoojaG Avatar
      PoojaG

      Ooh love that addition!

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      1. ninin Avatar
        ninin

        Thank you!

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        1. PoojaG Avatar
          PoojaG

          You’re welcome!

          Reply
  5. precious, dinma, precious obialor Avatar
    precious, dinma, precious obialor

    I try not to hate her.

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    1. PoojaG Avatar
      PoojaG

      I love that- now I’m kind of wondering what she did!

      Reply
      1. precious, dinma, precious obialor Avatar
        precious, dinma, precious obialor

        A lot, but I think forgiving people is the best thing to do no matter what they did.

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        1. PoojaG Avatar
          PoojaG

          Yes forgiveness is definitely important.

          Reply
  6. 100 Country Trek Avatar
    100 Country Trek

    I love all of those comments 😄

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    1. PoojaG Avatar
      PoojaG

      I know everyone is so creative!!

      Reply
  7. ianscyberspace Avatar
    ianscyberspace

    And pointed road ahead is flooded

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    1. PoojaG Avatar
      PoojaG

      Haha at least she was warned on time!

      Reply
  8. lauriegronewold Avatar
    lauriegronewold

    But he’s always been that way.

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    1. PoojaG Avatar
      PoojaG

      Really good one- I love it!

      Reply
  9. Kate Avatar
    Kate

    She shuddered to think what’s coming.

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    1. Kate Avatar
      Kate

      Oops… I meant shuddered. It’s late, guys.

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      1. PoojaG Avatar
        PoojaG

        No worries I’ll edit it for you!!

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        1. Kate Avatar
          Kate

          Thanks!

          Reply
    2. PoojaG Avatar
      PoojaG

      I love horror so I totally love this one!

      Reply
  10. luellabea Avatar
    luellabea

    Cold fear moved down her spine

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    1. PoojaG Avatar
      PoojaG

      Love this one!! I kind of want to know more now lol!

      Reply
  11. The Dragon's Picnic Avatar
    The Dragon’s Picnic

    There could be only one reason

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    1. PoojaG Avatar
      PoojaG

      I want to know more now!!

      Reply
      1. The Dragon's Picnic Avatar
        The Dragon’s Picnic

        It might be better to wait!

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        1. PoojaG Avatar
          PoojaG

          Haha!

          Reply
  12. luellabea Avatar
    luellabea

    Startled. Had she been daydreaming again?

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    1. PoojaG Avatar
      PoojaG

      This is such a good one too!

      Reply
  13. luellabea Avatar
    luellabea

    This is fun! 😀

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    1. PoojaG Avatar
      PoojaG

      It is- it’s so fun for me to read everyone’s as well!

      Reply
  14. Infinity Essential Avatar
    Infinity Essential

    She grabbed to check his phone

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    1. PoojaG Avatar
      PoojaG

      Ooh that’s such a good one!!

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      1. Infinity Essential Avatar
        Infinity Essential

        Thanks I became an immediate fan of these six word stories

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        1. PoojaG Avatar
          PoojaG

          So glad to hear that!

          Reply
  15. Poet of the Light Avatar
    Poet of the Light

    She silently stole his willing heart!

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    1. PoojaG Avatar
      PoojaG

      Aww that’s so romantic!

      Reply
      1. Poet of the Light Avatar
        Poet of the Light

        I enjoy your quick impromptu challenges…

        Reply
        1. PoojaG Avatar
          PoojaG

          Thank you!

          Reply
  16. Poet of the Light Avatar
    Poet of the Light

    Found angel fluttering…in fresh snow!

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    1. PoojaG Avatar
      PoojaG

      That’s such a good one too!

      Reply
  17. Sulamitess Twelve Avatar
    Sulamitess Twelve

    Awesome Idea so to add another six word story to “He tapped her on the shoulder” – No one was there she froze…Then another six word story…Must Be My Guardian Angel Tapping – There’s no one at my door…You can use any of these it’s a great idea…Namaste

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    1. PoojaG Avatar
      PoojaG

      I thought it would be a fun way to interact! They’re all so good I love them!

      Reply
      1. Sulamitess Twelve Avatar
        Sulamitess Twelve

        Pooja check out my latest crazy six word story that i turned into a crazy advertisement on you tube…”Bestie Hot Head Oil For Beastie” https://youtu.be/SdimWtSiTKg

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        1. PoojaG Avatar
          PoojaG

          I’ll definitely check it out!

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          1. Sulamitess Twelve Avatar
            Sulamitess Twelve

            Pooja I trained my brain to think in terms of six word stories watch out our world is in trouble now cause I created a crazy new six word story recipe play list called are you ready?…”Bestie Breakfast For Beastie Hot Heads”…https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLTH9lYPTFsRSD4nPC7tkQyjHotqbEDTe5

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            1. PoojaG Avatar
              PoojaG

              Thanks for letting me know I’ll check it out!

              Reply
  18. Ashish - Proxywords Avatar
    Ashish – Proxywords

    Beautiful six word story. A small attempt
    She was afraid to look back.
    And before your six word sentence
    He followed her down the lane.

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    1. PoojaG Avatar
      PoojaG

      They’re both so perfect for before and after- thank you!

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      1. Ashish - Proxywords Avatar
        Ashish – Proxywords

        Thank you very much. This concept of six word story is real fun 😊

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        1. PoojaG Avatar
          PoojaG

          It’s very fun for me too!

          Reply
    2. Nehal Writes Avatar
      Nehal Writes

      These are both so nice

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      1. Ashish - Proxywords Avatar
        Ashish – Proxywords

        Thank you Nehal. Glad you liked it 😊

        Reply
  19. Shweta Suresh Avatar
    Shweta Suresh

    She was startled by his presence

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    1. PoojaG Avatar
      PoojaG

      You’re are definitely the queen of six word stories- love that addition!

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      1. Shweta Suresh Avatar
        Shweta Suresh

        Oh you’re too kind. Thanks a lot, Pooja ♥️

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        1. PoojaG Avatar
          PoojaG

          You’re very welcome!

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          1. Shweta Suresh Avatar
            Shweta Suresh

            ♥️🤗

            Reply
  20. Dulcy Singh Avatar
    Dulcy Singh

    Always in hurry should I stop,
    Loved yours too 💖 👍🏻👍🏻

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    1. PoojaG Avatar
      PoojaG

      Thank you and I love yours!

      Reply
  21. Lisa M. Boyd Avatar
    Lisa M. Boyd

    naked she hoped for his coat

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    1. PoojaG Avatar
      PoojaG

      Ooh that’s such a good one- I would never have thought of that!

      Reply
      1. Lisa M. Boyd Avatar
        Lisa M. Boyd

        Wohoo! Thank you so much! I absolutely love these. I would do my own if I could figure out how to ping to the original post! My dilemma, is keeping me from doing more! *sigh*

        Reply
        1. PoojaG Avatar
          PoojaG

          I recently came across a post that explains how to do it and has a video too- https://thesoulsearchersite.wordpress.com/2020/09/26/create-pingbacks/
          Hope that helps!

          Reply
          1. Lisa M. Boyd Avatar
            Lisa M. Boyd

            You’re the best! For real! Thank you so much! You’re rad! 💜 Watch our here I come, lol! Blessings Lisa

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            1. PoojaG Avatar
              PoojaG

              You’re totally welcome haha!

              Reply
  22. Ojocheyi Avatar
    Ojocheyi

    …..she held her breath and fainted

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    1. PoojaG Avatar
      PoojaG

      Lol love this one!

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      1. Ojocheyi Avatar
        Ojocheyi

        Yay!!!😂
        Thanks 😊

        Reply
  23. Nehal Writes Avatar
    Nehal Writes

    She flinched and kept moving hurriedly.

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    1. PoojaG Avatar
      PoojaG

      Very realistic- love it!

      Reply
      1. Nehal Writes Avatar
        Nehal Writes

        Thanks

        Reply
  24. Mimie Mailumo Avatar
    Mimie Mailumo

    ^Any last words? He whispered in her ear.^Before she had the chance to reply, he stabbed her-

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    1. PoojaG Avatar
      PoojaG

      Ooh I love it!

      Reply
  25. Mimie Mailumo Avatar
    Mimie Mailumo

    Too dark?😅

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    1. PoojaG Avatar
      PoojaG

      Not at all- I’m a huge fan of psycho-thrillers so that was one of my favourites!

      Reply
      1. Mimie Mailumo Avatar
        Mimie Mailumo

        Sameee!!!

        Reply
  26. Cindy Georgakas Avatar
    Cindy Georgakas

    and passed out in his arms…

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    1. PoojaG Avatar
      PoojaG

      In a good way or a bad way??

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      1. Cindy Georgakas Avatar
        Cindy Georgakas

        looking for ways to end the story are you? hmmmmm

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        1. PoojaG Avatar
          PoojaG

          Haha maybe…

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          1. Cindy Georgakas Avatar
            Cindy Georgakas

            🤣😂🤣

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      2. Cindy Georgakas Avatar
        Cindy Georgakas

        he gave her a kiss and she woke up a ?

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        1. PoojaG Avatar
          PoojaG

          Lol that sounds about right!

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          1. Cindy Georgakas Avatar
            Cindy Georgakas

            😂👏😎

            Reply
  27. Ngozi Dorcas Awa Avatar
    Ngozi Dorcas Awa

    She stood still and smiled shyly.

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    1. PoojaG Avatar
      PoojaG

      Aww that’s so sweet!

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      1. Ngozi Dorcas Awa Avatar
        Ngozi Dorcas Awa

        😀

        Reply
  28. Opher Avatar
    Opher

    Can you pass the milk, please?

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    1. PoojaG Avatar
      PoojaG

      Haha lol!

      Reply
  29. aashnadrishti Avatar
    aashnadrishti

    And asks for the nearby shelter.

    Reply
    1. PoojaG Avatar
      PoojaG

      Ooh good one!

      Reply
  30. Tega's Journal Avatar
    Tega’s Journal

    Staring deep into her hazel eyes.
    Em, I tried, did I?

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    1. PoojaG Avatar
      PoojaG

      You did really well!!

      Reply
  31. Jim Borden Avatar
    Jim Borden

    “May I have the next dance?”

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    1. PoojaG Avatar
      PoojaG

      Aww so romantic!

      Reply
  32. inkgirlandwords Avatar
    inkgirlandwords

    Nice! I like this one.
    My attempt:
    She turned, fear in her eyes.

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    1. PoojaG Avatar
      PoojaG

      Ooh loved that- I love horror!

      Reply
      1. inkgirlandwords Avatar
        inkgirlandwords

        Yeah!

        Reply
  33. The Parmigiana Whisperer Avatar
    The Parmigiana Whisperer

    I love your story and all the comments! so many clever responses!

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    1. PoojaG Avatar
      PoojaG

      Thank you and yes people have come up with such great responses!

      Reply
  34. Holly Smith Avatar
    Holly Smith

    Oh six word stories is back! I love these.

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    1. PoojaG Avatar
      PoojaG

      Thank you so much!!

      Reply
  35. emaloveswriting Avatar
    emaloveswriting

    Swimming…then something touched my foot

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    1. PoojaG Avatar
      PoojaG

      Oh no!! Loved this!

      Reply
      1. emaloveswriting Avatar
        emaloveswriting

        Thank you.

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        1. PoojaG Avatar
          PoojaG

          You’re welcome.

          Reply
  36. Roshni Avatar
    Roshni

    She kept walking across the woods 😨

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    1. PoojaG Avatar
      PoojaG

      Ooh very scary!!

      Reply
  37. chasingthemaximumlife Avatar
    chasingthemaximumlife

    And after looking at him, she ran away😅🤗

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    1. PoojaG Avatar
      PoojaG

      Lol good one!!

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      1. chasingthemaximumlife Avatar
        chasingthemaximumlife

        Haha😅😄🥰😊

        Reply
  38. Joel Abakah Avatar
    Joel Abakah

    He tapped on her shoulder
    And the mysterious morse code continued (I tried😅)

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    1. PoojaG Avatar
      PoojaG

      I really liked the morse code twist!!

      Reply
      1. Joel Abakah Avatar
        Joel Abakah

        💚💚thank you!
        I hope one of your readers continues it then. Or you perhaps😁

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        1. PoojaG Avatar
          PoojaG

          😊

          Reply
  39. 𝑹𝒐𝑩𝑰𝑵 🌋 Avatar
    𝑹𝒐𝑩𝑰𝑵 🌋

    She took gender equality too personally

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    1. 𝑹𝒐𝑩𝑰𝑵 🌋 Avatar
      𝑹𝒐𝑩𝑰𝑵 🌋

      (Why the villain’s always got to be a man? 😆)

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      1. 𝑹𝒐𝑩𝑰𝑵 🌋 Avatar
        𝑹𝒐𝑩𝑰𝑵 🌋

        Social distancing doesn’t apply to murderers 😈

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        1. 𝑹𝒐𝑩𝑰𝑵 🌋 Avatar
          𝑹𝒐𝑩𝑰𝑵 🌋

          Social distancing doesn’t apply to sociopaths!

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          1. PoojaG Avatar
            PoojaG

            Lollll 😂😂

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            1. 𝑹𝒐𝑩𝑰𝑵 🌋 Avatar
              𝑹𝒐𝑩𝑰𝑵 🌋

              🤣😁

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      2. PoojaG Avatar
        PoojaG

        Because women are better at getting away with it!

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        1. 𝑹𝒐𝑩𝑰𝑵 🌋 Avatar
          𝑹𝒐𝑩𝑰𝑵 🌋

          Haha true

          Reply
    2. PoojaG Avatar
      PoojaG

      Ahaha 😂

      Reply
  40. Cas9.tech Avatar
    Cas9.tech

    He swung the wooden baseball bat.

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    1. PoojaG Avatar
      PoojaG

      Haha good one!

      Reply
  41. oneta hayes Avatar
    oneta hayes

    This was a fun variation on your six words. I’ve enjoyed them. I think I was most surprised at the “would you pass the milk, please.” That was funny.

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    1. PoojaG Avatar
      PoojaG

      Thank you and I found that one funny too!

      Reply
  42. Eromonsele Emmanuel Avatar
    Eromonsele Emmanuel

    And she smiled and looked back.

    Reply
    1. PoojaG Avatar
      PoojaG

      Aww so sweet!!

      Reply
      1. Eromonsele Emmanuel Avatar
        Eromonsele Emmanuel

        Yes! It has to be a good ending this time.

        Reply
        1. PoojaG Avatar
          PoojaG

          Sometimes you need a happy ending!

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          1. Eromonsele Emmanuel Avatar
            Eromonsele Emmanuel

            Yes!!!!!

            Reply
  43. Mommy Me Avatar
    Mommy Me

    “Are you sure we are pregnant?”

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    1. PoojaG Avatar
      PoojaG

      Ooh that’s such a good one!!

      Reply
  44. Blessing Pius Avatar
    Blessing Pius

    Lovely post😇

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    1. PoojaG Avatar
      PoojaG

      Thank you!

      Reply
  45. stevespeakshistruth Avatar
    stevespeakshistruth

    Her face lit up the darkness

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    1. PoojaG Avatar
      PoojaG

      I love that!

      Reply
      1. stevespeakshistruth Avatar
        stevespeakshistruth

        Oh, thanks, you’re so kind.

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        1. PoojaG Avatar
          PoojaG

          You’re very welcome!

          Reply
  46. sunisanthosh Avatar
    sunisanthosh

    She was shocked to see him !! 💟

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    1. PoojaG Avatar
      PoojaG

      Ooh good one!

      Reply
  47. Belladonna Avatar
    Belladonna

    And that’s where it all began….

    Reply
    1. PoojaG Avatar
      PoojaG

      Ooh I love that because you can do so much with it!

      Reply
      1. Belladonna Avatar
        Belladonna

        Yes!!!!!!

        Reply
  48. tianiangelahibbert Avatar
    tianiangelahibbert

    That one gave me chills!

    Reply
    1. PoojaG Avatar
      PoojaG

      Thank you!!

      Reply
  49. Prarthana Vijayakumar Avatar
    Prarthana Vijayakumar

    A little late to the party, 😅 anyway here’s my continuation.
    He called. She turned. With tears.

    Reply
    1. PoojaG Avatar
      PoojaG

      Ooh that’s so good!

      Reply
  50. Luke Shalom Avatar
    Luke Shalom

    I woke and went right back.

    Reply
    1. PoojaG Avatar
      PoojaG

      Love that!

      Reply
  51. jivankvoic Avatar
    jivankvoic

    They ate, he spoke, she smiled.

    Reply
    1. PoojaG Avatar
      PoojaG

      Aww that’s nice!

      Reply
  52. Pain Bug Avatar
    Pain Bug

    Walking away from his past forever.

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    1. PoojaG Avatar
      PoojaG

      Wow that could be both sad and happy.

      Reply
  53. Kami Avatar
    Kami

    Cold shivers ran down her spine

    Reply
    1. PoojaG Avatar
      PoojaG

      Ooh good one!

      Reply
      1. Kami Avatar
        Kami

        Thank you 🤗

        Reply
  54. Gibberish Avatar
    Gibberish

    She looked back, there was nobody.

    Reply
    1. PoojaG Avatar
      PoojaG

      Ooh that’s such a scary one!!

      Reply
  55. #Eaglewrites Avatar
    #Eaglewrites

    She healed him and remains injured.

    Reply
    1. PoojaG Avatar
      PoojaG

      Aww that’s so sweet!

      Reply
  56. Nithya Avatar
    Nithya

    She crumbled under his tender warmth.

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    1. PoojaG Avatar
      PoojaG

      Ooh good one!!

      Reply
  57. sakinakagalwala Avatar
    sakinakagalwala

    And grabbed her in his arms…

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    1. PoojaG Avatar
      PoojaG

      Aww that’s sweet!

      Reply
  58. Rochdalestu Avatar
    Rochdalestu

    Also on her knees and toes

    Reply
    1. PoojaG Avatar
      PoojaG

      Nice addition!

      Reply
  59. stelorafedie101blog Avatar
    stelorafedie101blog

    A gesture of loving her mysteriously🥰

    Reply
  60. DEVANG UPADHYAYA Avatar
    DEVANG UPADHYAYA

    But it was just an illusion.

    Reply
    1. Pooja G Avatar
      Pooja G

      How sad.

      Reply

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