Fate Is A Cruel Thing

Fate Is A Cruel Thing

Her POV:

At midnight, I stood there waiting for my lover. I waited for hours in the cold winter, praying that he had not been caught. It had not been easy to sneak out. But no one would dare say no to the Queen, even when the request was as odd as going for a stroll on a chilly winters night all on my own. I could tell that they knew something was wrong, I was acting different. But I knew what I had to do.

My husband, the King everyone so admired, was not the man I wanted to spend my life with. I knew that from the moment we met. But it was too late by then. He had already fallen in love with me and promised me the elite life of a queen. Before I knew what was happening, my parents promised me to him and when the time came I married him as was my duty. You see, fate is a cruel thing.

Over time, his love became harder and harder to bear. His interest in me slowly became an obsession till I felt like I could not breathe anymore. I could not do a single thing without him knowing and without his approval. I tried to runaway but that only made it worse. He found me a bodyguard. A young man who would spend every moment with me to make sure I could never escape. To report back to my husband about me. Little did my husband know, he had found me the man of my dreams. Together, we made the perfect plan to escape together. We would slip away into the night, never to be seen again. We had it all planned out…

“There you are!” I heard and quickly spun around.

His POV:

From the moment I laid eyes on her, I knew she was the one for me. The only problem was that she was the wife of my boss, who also happened to be King. I thought I had been hired to keep her safe but over time I realised I had been hired to simply keep her here. There was a deep sadness in her beautiful eyes that I would have killed to take away. I heard her crying each night and every morning. And I saw the longing in her eyes when she explored the lands around the castle. Freedom. That’s all she wanted. Nay, that’s all she needed.

Once I was sure she felt about me the same way I felt about her, we made a plan to escape. I knew I had to get her out of there. The Kings eccentricities were becoming more extreme when it came to her. Soon he would have her locked in her room and escape would be futile. I was on my way to her when I felt a tap on my shoulder and turned around. To my horror, it was the King and he did not look pleased.

Her POV:

“There you are!”

“There’s my precious wife, let’s head back to the castle together,” said my husband. I looked down and followed him, knowing that if he were here then he must know about our plan. He had won and came to collect me. To remind me that there was no getting away from him. I followed him with my eyes down and tears falling down my cheeks. I prayed that my lover was okay, that he had been able to escape the clutches of this madman. Something I was now understanding I could never do.

“What did you do to him?” I whispered as soon as we were in the privacy of the castle.

“See for yourself,” he told me as we entered the bedroom. There I saw him lying on the floor, covered in blood and bruises. Barely breathing. I fell to my knees and caressed his face. I cried harder than I ever have as I held him tight.

“That’s enough,” said my husband, pulling me away from him.

“You should be grateful he’s alive. If you so much as leave this room, I will have him killed. And if you ever try to leave again I’ll have everyone you love killed one by one until you return. Do you understand me?” he asked.

I nodded between sobs. With that threat, he left me to cry as one of the guards came and carried the only man I ever loved away. Fate is a cruel thing, you simply cannot escape yours.


About “Fate Is A Cruel Thing”:

This story is a response to Kevin’s NTT challenge. I love participating in these. The image I used was from his NTT Challenge post for this week. If you haven’t been on Kevin’s blog yet, do check it out.

This short story was inspired by the MANY historical dramas I watch. I used to only watch Kdrama’s but these days I’m into Cdrama’s too. With this story, I wanted it to be a more realistic depiction of love and relationships. Things don’t always work out. And you don’t always end up with the person you love. In fact, a lot of times we end up with the wrong person. Especially back then when women had almost no rights. In this image, I felt like she was hopeful yet scared. And that’s what I wanted to portray.

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85 responses to “Fate Is A Cruel Thing”

  1. I was reading this and was thinking about a Cdrama I watched recently. Then I saw the connection you made. This is wonderful storytelling Pooja. Different Perspectives… Adds a different stimulus to the imagination. 👏👏

    1. What was the Cdrama because it may be the same one I’m watching lol. Thanks so much, so glad you enjoyed it. 😊

      1. I’ll have to go look it up. But will let you know.

        1. Thanks, appreciate it.

  2. Hi, what a great story, very suspenseful and dramatic. I like the different points of view; they add much to the overall effect.

    1. Thanks so much, so glad you enjoyed the story. I wanted to try something new with the different POV’s so glad it worked.

      1. Yes, it sure did.

  3. It’d be cool to include the King’s POV 😎

    1. I thought of doing that but decided he needs to keep it to himself lol 😅

  4. I recommend not getting married. 🤭

    1. I do too 😫

      1. 🤙🏻🤙🏻

  5. Great story, Pooja! I love the alternating points of view. Very, very well written! 👏👏

    1. Thanks so much, so happy to hear that! 😊

      1. Top notch indeed. 👍👍

  6. That was a sad but great story. It used to be that way. It made me think of Karin Månsdotter a peasant girl whom the Swedish King Eric XIV took for a wife (and Queen) in the 1500’s. He was mentally ill. It was a quite different story but I don’t think it was a happy marriage.

    1. Thanks so much. I’ve heard about him but don’t know too much about his life. Will definitely read more about him.

  7. Perhaps a trip to the castle kitchen and a nice big knife will solve the problem for her? 🙂

    1. Hmm, perhaps so.

  8. Magnificent and heartbreaking

    1. Thanks so much.

  9. Pooja, what a story!! It was intriguing, heartbreaking, and engaging. You write beautifully and it keeps you wanting to read more.

    1. Thanks so much! I’m so happy to hear that you enjoyed it.

      1. Yes, you’re very good at story telling!

        1. Aw, thank you!

          1. You’re welcome!

  10. it’s a wow, Pooja….to both sides so touching and to your title “Fate is a cruel thing..” so accurate.🤍

    1. Thanks so much, so glad you enjoyed the story 😊

      1. pleasure always 🤍🌷

  11. Very nice, though I like the title a lot more. Thanks.

    1. Thank you so much.

  12. Very nice to show two points of view. Sad ending, but it wasn’t likely to end in a different way.

    1. Thanks so much. Yes, I think I wanted a more realistic ending with this one.

  13. Beautiful story Pooja! I was sad they didn’t get to run away together…but understand that was the point.
    Fate can be cruel at times, but I see fate as something that can be changed if you are determined enough.

    I hope you have an awesome day and don’t melt!

    1. Thanks so much! Yeah, I wanted to have a more realistic storyline. That’s great, I think that’s a great way to look at it!

  14. This is a beautiful story, Pooja! I have been enjoying all the NTT posts.

    1. Thanks so much! Yes, they’re so fun to read. I enjoyed your response to the NTT challenge too.

      1. Thank you. You’re so kind. 🙂

        1. My pleasure 😊

  15. Nicely written. I’ve watched more C-dramas than K-dramas over the last year or two as well. The fates are indeed often cruel. What the last C-drama you really liked?

    1. Thanks so much. I think my favourite Cdrama is Couple of Mirrors. I watched it last year I think and absolutely loved it. What about you?

      1. Ooh, I wondered about that one! Thanks for the rec.

        I’m deeply invested in Lost You Forever, and waiting for the 2nd season of Joy of Life!

        1. Joy of Life is amazing and haven’t seen Lost You Forever but will definitely check it out.

  16. Made me glad I found my soul mate and had 20 years of love and happiness. Made me sad that my husband passed away. After reading your story once again glad not to have anymore complications, no more love, because once you have had the best there is nothing more to be had and once again glad because my love and I will meet one day in paradise to be together forever. You and I have like minds with great imaginations that nothing can stop.

    1. It’s really great that you found someone who was so perfect for you and I’m so sorry for your loss but I’m glad you were able to have 20 amazing years together.
      Thanks so much. Having imaginative minds is such a gift and I’m glad we’re able to express ourselves through writing.

  17. Wonderful story.

    1. Thanks so much.

  18. 😭😭😭

  19. As soon as I saw your title, the title “Fate Is the Hunter” (book and novel) came to mind. Your title is more realistic, I think, implying that fate is always there and cannot be evaded. Though both titles convey a heaviness to bear about our choices and our chances. I appreciate your story very much. It’s intriguing, of course, that the king left the lover and everyone else she might love alive for now. His ego seems to supercede sexual infidelity in favor of the official appearance of fidelity. Well done. (Well done you, not the king.)

    1. Thank you so much. I’m glad you enjoyed the story. I haven’t read Fate Is The Hunter but will definitely check it out.
      Yes, I think I was trying to portray the king as someone who would rather be with someone who hates him and has been unfaithful rather than let her go.

      1. I meant to say novel and movie (“book and novel,” sheesh–have I mentioned that I take many strong medications?) Both are suspenseful. The movie is older and in black and white, yet I think the tension in the story and the characters come across effectively. I believe the king as a character in your story is a sophisticated construction that especialy in a short story (which is supposed to be short) is effectively crafted. And Happy Spring! (It started here at eleven o’clock last night.)

        1. No worries, I make typos and I’m not on anything. I got what you meant. Thank you and happy spring! It’s going to be similar weather in Kenya soon too with rain and a bit of sunshine.

  20. Sounds like the basis of a good long marriage!

    1. Haha yes, perhaps so!

  21. Lovely story 👌

    1. Thanks so much 😊

  22. One of my favs from you, Pooja <3 !! Perfectly captured image !! Very reminiscent of olden day horror folklore of kings and queens (even a Guinevere feel) !!

    1. Thanks so much, so glad you enjoyed it! ☺

  23. A sad ending to this story. Very well written Pooja 👏

    1. Thanks so much, yes I wanted it to be a bit more realistic.

      1. It is indeed closer to real life than a fairytale

  24. I loved the story, but it sounded more like a longer story beginning.

    1. Thanks so much and yeah I think it has the potential to evolve into a longer story.

  25. This is a great story, Pooja. Not your typical happy ending, but many love stories don’t end on a happy note. And I loved how you added the POVs too. Well done!

    1. Thanks so much. Yeah, I wanted the story to be a bit more realistic and like you said not all love stories end happily. Thanks!

      1. You’re welcome! Realistic was a good choice! I hope you write more. 😊

        1. Thanks, I hope to 😊

  26. Very well written, Pooja ❤️ I was waiting for a happy ending, but as you say, fate is indeed a cruel thing.

    1. Thanks so much. Yes, it unfortunately is ❤️

  27. That was good, Pooja. I also like historical dramas.

    1. Thanks so much. Yeah, historical dramas are pretty interesting to watch.

  28. This is an interesting story Pooja.

    It also reminded me about one of the “theories” about dating I believe in.
    Which, it’s not wise to marry/date someone very powerful than you. Simply because leaving such a relationship can cost you your life. Not that all powerful people are bad, but some really use their power to keep a person trapped.

    1. Thanks so much. That’s true, when there’s a big difference between you and your partner it can be a dangerous thing.

      1. You are welcome.
        It usually gives off the “your life is in my hands” vibe.

        1. For sure, I think so too.

  29. Horrifyingly good!

    1. Thanks, that’s what I was going for lol!

  30. Oh I loved it 😍😍

    The writer is so beautiful, what a lovely work. 😘😘

    This is something that we can see in stories of kings, samurai. I loved it

    I need part 2

    You better have a part 2

    Please 🥺🙏🏻

    1. So glad you enjoyed it 😊

      Yes, it was inspired by Asian stories and media since that’s what I first thought about. No part 2, not all endings are happy endings 😫

  31. Really good story Pooja. You created a realistic and almost tragic romance from that picture. I like how you had a relationship bloom with her body guard. Her husband must have been blind at first to not see the opportunity that he created for her. I don’t write many romance stories but I think I will work on that more. But, death may be inevitable in some since I like horror.

    1. Thank you so much. Yes, her husband really didn’t think it through giving her a body guard she spends 24/7 with. I wanted this one to have a sad ending, I knew that before I even knew what I would write. I do enjoy the mix of romance and horror so hope you write more of those when you can. Romance is a fun genre to dabble in.

  32. Good story Pooja! Well done you write fantasitic and are really a talented writer!

    1. Thank you so much! So glad you enjoyed it!

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