Our utopia quickly turned sour
The moment your lips touched hers
You’re still under the impression that you hold the power
But our baby is actually your brothers
You messed with the wrong woman
Because now I plan your death every night
One day I’ll be holding your gun
And you won’t be able to even put up a fight
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42 thoughts on “Our Utopia- A Poem”
Whoa! I felt this!
Haha thank you, I think?
Lol. All good things. All good things. Lol.
I think I’d say someone really needs to get out and find a new relationship, because that’s totally going to create a lot of confusion down the road. Murder is totally a bad idea. I mean, where do you stop at…we found with the Nova Scotia Mass Murder thing…it gets messy, there is a big inquest. People point fingers and blame each other…and it ends up in a big argument and no one wins. Just my take on that stuff. https://masscasualtycommission.ca/ Just a thought 😉 I cannot even consider what kind of family drama that would create. 😉
Haha yes it can be too much drama- divorce is a much easier option that people seem to forget for some reason 😂
Less trouble for the children too 😉
Not messing with you girl!
This is so good!
I definitely enjoyed it. This shows how versatile you are. You work really well with multiple genre/niche.
If I talk about a week, then you give a variety of content. Sometimes your blogs are humourous. Sometimes they are informative. Sometimes motivating. Sometimes horrifying. Sometimes thought Provoking. I really enjoy reading your content and I learn a lot from you and your work.
Thank you so much. I do enjoy writing horror more than anything when it comes to poetry or short stories. Glad you’re enjoying my posts.
Only mildly disturbing.
Oh good, I didn’t want it to be too horrifying.
A dark poem, you are multi talented. Handling different genres is quite impressive. Thanks for sharing and have a nice day!
Thanks so much and have a nice day too!
This just goes to prove that you dont mess with a woman. You just don’t. Amazing poem
Yup, never mess with women. Ever. Thank you.
Thank you 😂😂
Wow 😂💕 love this post 😍
Thank you 😊
Disturbing was a good word. Hmmm. It’s definitely moving and attention riviting.
Thank you. I was going for attention riveting.
You won! 🙂
This was out of the blue. Good job 👍👍
Thank you 😊
Nice drama, but she seems to be a psychopath. She should just move on with her life.
Yes, some people hold grudges for too long.
Haha, that is so funny and dramatic and horrific. I’ve seen relationships like that. Unfortunately it is not as rare as we tend to think. Family is supposed to be the place to offer comfort and love, but it can very well be the exact opposite.
Lol thank you. Yes, family can be the source of our happiness but sometimes it can also be the source of all our problems.
A good way to intimidate those who have deceived 😅
Haha for real 😂